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Angel In Human Skin

you see me a monster an angel in disgrace for I plucked my wings out just to honor the human race inconspicuous yet dark a disciple with a mark all they do is lie and swear they are always unprepared for free will might be your gift but their hearts are all adrift I'm ashamed of what I've done I can't be like everyone all these mortal emotions deny me of your devotion how can an angel be so void when human emotions they avoid they are right, we are wrong God have mercy on their Souls

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Date: 1/21/2021 6:28:00 PM
Great poem, Peter, with powerful thought provoking lines. So glad it was published in the 2020 PS Anthology ~
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Date: 5/24/2020 11:12:00 AM
Belated congrats, Peter, on POTD. Looking forward to reading more of your poems. ~ Gershon
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Date: 5/22/2020 3:25:00 AM
thanks for everyone for your support , you humble me with your comments, i feel honored, first time i had my work recognised
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Date: 5/21/2020 11:30:00 PM
Powerful and profound, Peter. Congratulations on your POTD
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Peter Paul Valletta
Date: 5/22/2020 3:21:00 AM
thanks so much Sam will drop by and see your work
Date: 5/21/2020 10:56:00 PM
Congrats on POTD with this powerful write, Peter! xx Rhonda
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Peter Paul Valletta
Date: 5/22/2020 3:22:00 AM
thanks Ronda
Date: 5/21/2020 9:00:00 PM
Many in the world place the suit of armor on, yet act in ways they shouldn't. Which is very wrong. This is deep and powerful. Congratulations Peter, on Poem of the Day. ~ Brandy
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Date: 5/21/2020 1:12:00 PM
Congratulations on having this thought provoking poem honored for POTD Peter! Nice to meet you. Aloha, Connie
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Date: 5/21/2020 12:35:00 PM
powerfully penned piece Peter, many congrats on POTD:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 5/21/2020 11:59:00 AM
Nice...You maybe right...Congratulations Peter on POTD...Well done
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Date: 5/21/2020 10:16:00 AM
Peter, congratulations on being selected as POTD with your dark and mysterious write, enjoy the honor!
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Date: 5/21/2020 7:30:00 AM
Congratulations on your POtD with intriguing piece.
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Date: 5/21/2020 5:54:00 AM
Intriguing write Peter...evil incarnates in many ways...Congrats!! on POTD!! my friend...^WW^ :o)
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Date: 5/21/2020 4:14:00 AM
Woah! Eloquent little masterpiece you have crafted here Peter. I love it. Every read being drawn in deeper. A fave! Congratulations on POTD. Have a fantastic day! :))) xomo!
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Peter Paul Valletta
Date: 5/22/2020 3:26:00 AM
As always my poet sister , you humble me
Date: 5/21/2020 4:13:00 AM
Youre right there, the beast lives amongst us, congratulations on POTD. Tom
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