Angel In Disguise

Her hands are pained and twisted
Her eyes almost blind
Her feet burning and crippled
Yet she still has some of her mind.

She use to be so lively
And loving all the time
Caring for her family
And saving every dime

She would work in her garden
To feed us all year round
Giving us all a pardon
And never making a sound

The clothes we wore
Her hands did sew
Filling every drawer
Never letting us go without, even if what she had was few

The beautiful smile upon her face
Would brighten any room
Like flowers in a vase
She would take away the gloom

Her life she spent giving love
To all that crossed her path
Putting everyone else above
Even if they were filled with wrath

But now her body is failing
And it is hard to even move
There are times she should be wailing
Yet she still has something to prove

Her hands are pained and twisted
Her eyes almost blind
Her feet burning and crippled
Yet she still loves all mankind

And when you gaze into her eyes
And see her heart you realize
She is more than just a mother in our lives
She is an angel is disguise.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 2/12/2015 7:40:00 PM
Janet, your poem is so heartfelt and beautiful it brought tears to my eyes. To have such a mother would be the greatest gift on earth! How blessed you are. If this is for a contest, I am sure it will place really high. 7
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Janet Eaton
Date: 2/12/2015 8:08:00 PM
Connie thank you for such beautiful words. I did not enter this in the contest because it does not have the correct rhyming format. Your words mean a lot. It's a special poem for a special lady
Date: 2/11/2015 7:58:00 AM
What a lovely dedication poem for your special angel. This is a heartwarming piece.
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Janet Eaton
Date: 2/11/2015 8:21:00 AM
Thank you Richard
Date: 2/11/2015 6:18:00 AM
Truely a beautiful tribute to your mother. Your words invoke such strong feelings toil, sacrifice ,love and "still loves all mankind". Your words of adoration make us KNOW that she surely is an angel. This work will go into my favourites. You have touched my heart. Love Shane xxx
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Janet Eaton
Date: 2/11/2015 6:52:00 AM
Shane, thank you for such wonderful comments. So happy you enjoyed it. Janet
Date: 2/11/2015 5:36:00 AM
Such a beautiful spirit you depict, an angel like this is easy to love.
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Janet Eaton
Date: 2/11/2015 6:49:00 AM
Thank you Maverick for your kind words Hugs Janet
Date: 2/10/2015 5:47:00 PM
Ooops forgot to hit the rating. :)
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Date: 2/10/2015 5:46:00 PM
A beautiful tribute to your angel in disguise. 7 times 7 if I could. God Bless you Janet and your mom. Ed
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Janet Eaton
Date: 2/10/2015 5:51:00 PM
Thank you Edwin for the kind words. My mother is a godsend that is for sure. Hugs to you Ed. Janet
Date: 2/10/2015 11:01:00 AM
So lovely so divine so wonderful "She is more than just a mother in our lives She is an angel is disguise" Mother is really an angel. God's grace. Love Janet...God bless.Rajat
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Janet Eaton
Date: 2/10/2015 11:35:00 AM
Thank you Rajat for such wonderful comments
Date: 2/10/2015 6:19:00 AM
A loving daughters unwavering, unconditional love for her all-loving mother...there can be no purer love in all of Gods creation!! How very beautiful...brought a lump into my throat! :) john.
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Janet Eaton
Date: 2/10/2015 6:39:00 AM
Such kind words. Thank you my friend.
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