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Angel In a Whirlwind

Angels - 12/28/21 This is a true story experienced by the poet. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Angel in a Whirlwind Storm of the decade descends upon the day Torrents of howling rainfall flood the streets Banshee winds whip trees, waves upon the bay Gloomy clouds shadow skies – sunlight in retreat. Faithful Wheaten, Snickers, too weak to stand Brightest amber terrier eyes listless in the storm The rainbow bridge calls to you – gentle command My broken heart in gusts of windswept mourn. Now the daylight leaves early – taking the light; Winter’s hand lays heavy upon the sky; My tears fall like raindrops dotting the night; Comfort alludes me in the fading light. Faithful childhood friend embraces my sorrow Dinner invitation and shopping at the mall “Come tonight - please don’t wait until tomorrow.” Our old habits die hard – we hear the mall call. Standing on a corner a lady with a Wheaten puppy Not a hair out of place – not waterlogged or soggy All felt calm around her – the chaos ceased - The wind stopped howling in her chrysalis of peace. Jumping up in greeting just like beloved Snickers I said farewell with teary eyes in a rain soaked slicker Pain vanished like a phantom – angelic smile released; Gentleness of this grace put my heart at ease. One last question posed “Where did you find your pup?” Directed to a breeder – my hope rising up One last puppy longing, waiting for a home Littermates with new families – this one all alone. The world stopped spinning on winter’s wings Warm brown eyes, soft grey ears helped pain lose its sting Cuddled in our arms softly sleeping in the night. Theodore our new pup – name means gift of God and light. Angel in a whirlwind, I never saw your wings But I know you were God’s messenger like crocus for the spring My heart filled with gratitude for your mission to this child And I’ve been seeing angels ever since the storm.

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Date: 3/23/2025 11:14:00 AM
My Dearest Rhyme Time Friend, my eyes mist with tears in so many emotions as I read and re-read your breathtaking poem. Your last verse I especially felt in such a deep soulful and visceral place "Angel in a whirlwind, I never saw your wings/But I know you were God’s messenger like crocus for the spring/My heart filled with gratitude for your mission to this child/And I’ve been seeing angels ever since the storm." Your precious pen spills heart-filling verses I'm so grateful to receive. Love this so much! A fav! Your exquisite poetic gift is precious indeed. Congratulations for your success in Rose's contest. I'm honored to share the podium with you, my sweet poetry sis. Warmest wishes sent on angel's wings.. ~Susan
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Date: 3/17/2025 12:54:00 PM
- Yes, an angel it was ... and I can understand the great joy ... Theodore will always remind you that angels exist :) - A wonderful poem, Sam :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 3/17/2025 4:09:00 AM
Thank you for joining my contest. It isn't easy writing about Angels. You all took it to a new level of consciousness for me. Each entry dove me closer to the thought that Angels exist. You are all winners in my book, grateful for all your efforts. May God bless your beautiful hearts, each and every one of you Love, Mystic
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 3/17/2025 9:29:00 AM
Thank you so much, Mystic Rose for the opportunity to share this story. The memory of it still fills me with awe and wonder. We are now on our fifth Wheaten but the memory of Snickers and her successor, Ted, is still fresh! This is a wonderful theme with so many wonderful, faith-filled entries. It is an honor to be on the winners list. Sending you blessings of spring renewal and perhaps an angel or two! PS - love your wolves poem!
Date: 11/1/2023 4:02:00 PM
A beautiful true story/poem Sam, I too believe in angels, have had experiences that tell me they’re for real. Your gift of God was your dog, that’s wonderful… Blessings, Belle
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Sam Kauffman
Date: 11/2/2023 10:51:00 AM
Thank you for reading this poem, Belle! I do believe this lady was a heavenly messenger not only sent to me but to my family who mourned the loss of our zany Snickers - an angelic presence in a storm! I, too, believe that angels are all around us carrying messages for us. So glad you enjoyed this story and this miracle!! It is a true joy to share our stories of angels at work! Blessings!
Date: 12/29/2021 12:06:00 PM
wow, this is an AMAZING story. i am so happy that you found this gift of God to replace your other dear doggie.
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