Debbie Duncan Poet Couplet

Angel Hearts

Angels lay their hearts across the sky.
Thing about that is, is there one for you?

What I'm saying is, you can pick anyone.
But is that the right one for you?

Who are they to say it's not for you.
Don't get me wrong, every heart should feel love.

I mean isn't that what it was created for?
Every heart surely deserves love, don't they?

I'm just asking, do you know the right one?
I know how it feels to have love dance around
 
your heart strings, then float away " poof".
Just to let you know how it sometimes goes.

Who am I to tell you who to let pull on your heart strings.
I wonder is there a tender heart waiting out there for me.

As I see the angels lay their heart strings across the sky.
I reach for one so I can fly. 



9/ 10/2012 Mon. 1:30pm

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Lisa Ricci May 4, 2017 at 4:28 PM Hello Debbie. I believe in angels thus I turned to this entry. It is lovely. With this concept and with the belief of the angels you can reach and you will fly. This is lovely. Well done completely.

John Posey May 19, 2015 at 1:16 AM Very nicely done, sweetheart..... Really strummed the strings of this old heart..... love Ya lots.... Jake

Michelle Mac Donald February 5, 2015 at 3:31 AM Oh, I got a chill from those last two lines. You are certainly flying with this piece, Debbie. Surely a "tender heart" waits for you...loving and compassionate! Keep well, best wishes, Love, Mikki

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther January 22, 2015 at 8:39 AM Hello Debbie.You did the Heavens proud in ANGEL HEARTS. Keep on keeping on.

Bhavna Khemlani April 13, 2014 at 3:55 AM Nice write up. Angels in disguise - blessing and uplifting. Take care, Bhavna Debbie Duncan April 13, 2014 at 8:58 PM Thank you Bhavna :)

Olajide Shadipe March 30, 2014 at 4:57 AM lovely! Wish i could be that angel.

Poet Destroyer A December 24, 2013 at 2:28 AM Deb, this is awesome... Linda Debbie Duncan January 8, 2014 at 12:06 PM Thank you Linda ;)

Don Johnson December 23, 2013 at 1:25 AM seek and you will always find, the fella with the cute behind, and then? yep my sis smells cigarette smoke when Dad is about ... Recently my Cousin Margaret died, i had a vivid dream there she was a young blonde lady again ....and i could hear the welcome for her ... "The green green grass of home" down the road i looked and there came Mary, hair of gold and lips like cherrys, its good to touch the green green grass of home...Margaret Mary Brummell was home .....

Chuck Melugin December 22, 2013 at 7:01 PM You must have caught the angel because you soar with your poetry!! Your creative heart speaks beauty!! chuck

Kelly Deschler December 2, 2013 at 2:25 PM This is just beautiful, Debbie! I do believe that there is a soul mate out there for everyone. The hard part is finding them! A fantastic poem! I really enjoyed the read!...Thank you for the wonderful comments! I appreciate it very much! And, I am so glad that you enjoyed my collaboration with Linda, on "Atlantis"! :) Debbie Duncan December 2, 2013 at 3:15 PM Thank you Kelly ;}

Robert Johnson November 7, 2013 at 2:52 PM We get so tied to this ole earth that we don't look above. For as you say, that's where they are. The one's who can bring love. Peace. :) Debbie Duncan November 7, 2013 at 4:54 PM Thank you Robert ;}

Litan Dey November 4, 2013 at 10:32 AM last two lines attract me so much and they are so true.Angel's hearts are floating and dancing in the sky...lovely view.

Phyllis Babcock October 29, 2013 at 10:37 PM Made me smile with this poem. My husband and I are so opposite that you wonder how we ever got together. Love your thoughts on this delightful poem. love phyl Debbie Duncan October 30, 2013 at 12:12 AM Thank you phyl ;}

Don Johnson October 27, 2013 at 5:56 PM our bodies wear out time and again, but we return to the earthly plane, our lover friends return they do,, we meet again fore life is through, on this you can depend, magnetic attractions too, and pre-written is the when...... Don re: "Angel Hearts" Debbie Duncan Don Johnson November 26, 2013 at 9:23 PM Yes the one will come if you ask for him, and keep a looking thick- n-thin, till the mystic ocean parts for you .... and here comes bugaloo...to grin.... Debbie Duncan October 27, 2013 at 6:39 PM Thank you for coming to read yet again ;} good verse you penned in my comment box ;}

Robert Pettit October 27, 2013 at 3:42 PM You have penned delightful descriptiveness here.

Arthur Vaso October 27, 2013 at 12:28 AM So lovely, reminds me the song "Can I have this dance" by Anne Murray Debbie Duncan October 27, 2013 at 1:07 AM Thank you arthur , I haven't heard that song for a while, though it was/ is a favorite song ;}

Lucilla Carrillo October 25, 2013 at 6:44 PM How very beautiful your poem is. I want to fly too. Maybe I'll join you. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla Debbie Duncan October 25, 2013 at 10:08 PM Thank you Lucilla ;}

Debbie Guzzi October 25, 2013 at 12:21 PM Very pleasant reading your verse today. Light & Love Debbie Duncan October 25, 2013 at 11:10 PM Thank you for coming by Debbie ;}

Duke Beaufort October 25, 2013 at 10:57 AM I just love the way you take this subject and deal with it. There is no accounting for chemistry. I have seen some very strange combinations. You have been very kind to leave wonderful comments for me. Your time and effort are very much appreciated. You are really quite sweet and tender. I am a happily married man, but if I were not, then .......... Debbie Duncan October 25, 2013 at 11:40 AM Hello Duke , I thank you for reading and always leaving nice comments ;}

Skat A October 24, 2013 at 7:15 PM Debbie, this is very beautiful. Hold on tight the flight seems never ending.... LOVE SKAT Debbie Duncan October 25, 2013 at 2:52 PM Thanks for reading SKAT ;}

Andrea Dietrich October 24, 2013 at 3:02 PM well, I still likes it!!!

Andrea Dietrich October 23, 2013 at 9:05 PM this is precious, Debbie. Thanks for letting me know you posted this new poem and I hope it does well in the contest! Debbie Duncan October 23, 2013 at 11:14 PM This is not for contest ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen October 23, 2013 at 6:47 AM - Debbie this is beautiful .... also feel a bit sad .... All the best to you my friend! - oxox // Anne-Lise :) Debbie Duncan October 23, 2013 at 2:36 PM Thank you Anne Lise for coming by ;}

Donna Jones October 22, 2013 at 10:58 PM All we can do is dream and and hope I guess Debbie...nice poem Debbie Duncan October 23, 2013 at 12:10 AM Thanks for reading Donna ;}