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Angel Hearts

Angels lay their hearts across the sky.
Thing about that is, is there one for you?

What I'm saying is, you can pick anyone.
But is that the right one for you?

Who are they to say it's not for you.
Don't get me wrong, every heart should feel love.

I mean isn't that what it was created for?
Every heart surely deserves love, don't they?

I'm just asking, do you know the right one?
I know how it feels to have love dance around
 
your heart strings, then float away " poof".
Just to let you know how it sometimes goes.

Who am I to tell you who to let pull on your heart strings.
I wonder is there a tender heart waiting out there for me.

As I see the angels lay their heart strings across the sky.
I reach for one so I can fly. 



9/ 10/2012 Mon. 1:30pm

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Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/4/2017 4:28:00 PM

Hello Debbie. I believe in angels thus I turned to this entry. It is lovely. With this concept and with the belief of the angels you can reach and you will fly. This is lovely. Well done completely.

John Posey

Date: 5/19/2015 1:16:00 AM

Very nicely done, sweetheart..... Really strummed the strings of this old heart..... love Ya lots.... Jake

Michelle Mac Donald

Date: 2/5/2015 3:31:00 AM

Oh, I got a chill from those last two lines. You are certainly flying with this piece, Debbie. Surely a "tender heart" waits for you...loving and compassionate! Keep well, best wishes, Love, Mikki

Val Brooklyn Rogers Blk Panther

Date: 1/22/2015 8:39:00 AM

Hello Debbie.You did the Heavens proud in ANGEL HEARTS. Keep on keeping on.

Bhavna Khemlani

Date: 4/13/2014 3:55:00 AM

Nice write up. Angels in disguise - blessing and uplifting. Take care, Bhavna

Debbie Duncan
Date: 4/13/2014 8:58:00 PM

Thank you Bhavna :)

Olajide Shadipe

Date: 3/30/2014 4:57:00 AM

lovely! Wish i could be that angel.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/24/2013 2:28:00 AM

Deb, this is awesome... Linda

Debbie Duncan
Date: 1/8/2014 12:06:00 PM

Thank you Linda ;)

Don Johnson

Date: 12/23/2013 1:25:00 AM

seek and you will always find, the fella with the cute behind, and then? yep my sis smells cigarette smoke when Dad is about ... Recently my Cousin Margaret died, i had a vivid dream there she was a young blonde lady again ....and i could hear the welcome for her ... "The green green grass of home" down the road i looked and there came Mary, hair of gold and lips like cherrys, its good to touch the green green grass of home...Margaret Mary Brummell was home .....

Chuck Melugin

Date: 12/22/2013 7:01:00 PM

You must have caught the angel because you soar with your poetry!! Your creative heart speaks beauty!! chuck

Kelly Deschler

Date: 12/2/2013 2:25:00 PM

This is just beautiful, Debbie! I do believe that there is a soul mate out there for everyone. The hard part is finding them! A fantastic poem! I really enjoyed the read!...Thank you for the wonderful comments! I appreciate it very much! And, I am so glad that you enjoyed my collaboration with Linda, on "Atlantis"! :)

Debbie Duncan
Date: 12/2/2013 3:15:00 PM

Thank you Kelly ;}

Robert Johnson

Date: 11/7/2013 2:52:00 PM

We get so tied to this ole earth that we don't look above. For as you say, that's where they are. The one's who can bring love. Peace. :)

Debbie Duncan
Date: 11/7/2013 4:54:00 PM

Thank you Robert ;}

Litan Dey

Date: 11/4/2013 10:32:00 AM

last two lines attract me so much and they are so true.Angel's hearts are floating and dancing in the sky...lovely view.

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 10/29/2013 10:37:00 PM

Made me smile with this poem. My husband and I are so opposite that you wonder how we ever got together. Love your thoughts on this delightful poem. love phyl

Debbie Duncan
Date: 10/30/2013 12:12:00 AM

Thank you phyl ;}

Don Johnson

Date: 10/27/2013 5:56:00 PM

our bodies wear out time and again, but we return to the earthly plane, our lover friends return they do,, we meet again fore life is through, on this you can depend, magnetic attractions too, and pre-written is the when...... Don re: "Angel Hearts" Debbie Duncan

Don Johnson
Date: 11/26/2013 9:23:00 PM

Yes the one will come if you ask for him, and keep a looking thick- n-thin, till the mystic ocean parts for you .... and here comes bugaloo...to grin....

Debbie Duncan
Date: 10/27/2013 6:39:00 PM

Thank you for coming to read yet again ;} good verse you penned in my comment box ;}

Robert Pettit

Date: 10/27/2013 3:42:00 PM

You have penned delightful descriptiveness here.

Arthur Vaso

Date: 10/27/2013 12:28:00 AM

So lovely, reminds me the song "Can I have this dance" by Anne Murray

Debbie Duncan
Date: 10/27/2013 1:07:00 AM

Thank you arthur , I haven't heard that song for a while, though it was/ is a favorite song ;}

Lucilla Carrillo

Date: 10/25/2013 6:44:00 PM

How very beautiful your poem is. I want to fly too. Maybe I'll join you. Thanks for sharing.... Lucilla

Debbie Duncan
Date: 10/25/2013 10:08:00 PM

Thank you Lucilla ;}

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/25/2013 12:21:00 PM

Very pleasant reading your verse today. Light & Love

Debbie Duncan
Date: 10/25/2013 11:10:00 PM

Thank you for coming by Debbie ;}

Duke Beaufort

Date: 10/25/2013 10:57:00 AM

I just love the way you take this subject and deal with it. There is no accounting for chemistry. I have seen some very strange combinations. You have been very kind to leave wonderful comments for me. Your time and effort are very much appreciated. You are really quite sweet and tender. I am a happily married man, but if I were not, then ..........

Debbie Duncan
Date: 10/25/2013 11:40:00 AM

Hello Duke , I thank you for reading and always leaving nice comments ;}