Debbie Duncan Poet Free verse

Angel

Hello love
I saw you there 
As I was walking through 
And I really must say 
You are the form of true beauty
As I whisper my prayers to God
I whispered for someone like you 
I see Him there in your eyes
If you take that chance on me 
I would fall to my knees for you
We could truly become something
 As the angels whisper in God's ear
I can see my future in  your eyes
We could be the start of something 
To last us a lifetime or two 
No doubt there are many who 
Want to get next to you 
I'm also sure you can pick 
And choose whomever you want 
You are classic beauty personified 
Angels were singing as God molded you 
God colored outside the lines this time  
Some would say you are the spark 
That lights up the fires within 
For God must have sent you to bring 
The light with you for all the world to see
I hear the angels sing as I look into your eyes
I could hold you in my heart for a lifetime or two
You are a dream coming into my life just for me
A tall glass of water on a parched throat you are
Can you tell me do you feel as I do ~ can you love me too!

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Ingrid Showalter Swift March 28, 2014 at 7:15 PM HI Debbie This one wants an edit : "seen" I don't mean to be a pain just since it stopped me from enjoying the poem,,,,please feel free to tell me if I need an edit..what are we here for if not to catch each other :) unless you were trying to capture a certain voice? Debbie Duncan March 29, 2014 at 3:31 PM You don't need an edit :) Debbie Duncan March 29, 2014 at 3:24 PM You don't need an edit , ;)

Sara Kendrick January 28, 2013 at 5:46 AM Passionate work I am reading this morning..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Debbie Duncan March 30, 2014 at 2:06 AM Thank you Sara :) Debbie Duncan January 28, 2013 at 9:53 AM Thank you Sara ;}

Kabuteng P.Ink K. August 26, 2012 at 2:26 AM This is such a sweet and romantic poem, Debbie....very nice! Debbie Duncan August 26, 2012 at 2:35 AM Thank you nikko ;}

Matthew Anish July 24, 2012 at 1:17 PM Reminds me of a song from the 1950's - I think it was by Johny Msestro - "The Angels Listened In" . Very sweet, romantic sentiments. Peace & Love Matthew Anish Debbie Duncan July 24, 2012 at 2:53 PM Thank you for reading my words Matthew, I'll have to look up that song ,,,, you have a blessed day Matt ;}

Laurel Larison July 12, 2012 at 8:03 AM What a wonderful poem. So true angels are with us every day. laurel Debbie Duncan July 12, 2012 at 2:47 PM Thank you Laurel,,,, raised catholic,,,,, I so believe in angels,,,, you have a blessed day ;}

John Rhinem April 28, 2012 at 3:10 PM Ps. Smile ˜ I love beautiful Angels too sooo, its beauty, became a love song's favourite *

John Rhinem April 28, 2012 at 3:04 PM Smile ˜ Yesss, I can, but Your endless beauty, already knows this my beautiful love * Smile, I thought I would steal to make this my own, my dear beautiful Debbie ˜ I couldn't help it, because You Are sooo beautiful ˜ My love, Forever, John!:) ˜

Robert Pettit April 4, 2012 at 12:52 AM You communicate your message in simple words that just about anyone here can understand. Just one item needs correction: for good grammar, change your second line to "I saw you there". Everything else appears well enough.

Don Johnson March 28, 2012 at 7:58 PM a vision of lovliness ...the found , the one we seek:) Debbie Duncan March 28, 2012 at 8:07 PM well thank you Don,, you said it,, the one we seek out ;} you have a sweet day,, thank you for reading ;}

Judy Ball March 28, 2012 at 4:24 PM Oh nicely done and beautifully written. So much honesty and true emotion here. Excellent. God Bless, JB Debbie Duncan March 28, 2012 at 4:51 PM Thank you so much Judy,,,you have a blessed day ;}

Anne-Lise Andresen March 28, 2012 at 2:22 AM Sweet and lovely written Debbie,very well written. Have a lovely day in sunshine and love. - oxox Anne-Lise