Andromeda

I AM one of the swirling celestial bodies trailing beyond a galaxy’s realm so luminous... and Jupiter’s neon threads spin , while Orion and meteors glide along planetary zones with glazed fingers of light, floating on colored frames. Somehow, I am many when my stars parade, aligning with earth, bursting from each equinox. And my outer spirit reels into a lunar dance; every axis heightening flamed energy while humans throb in their own center... a metallic twirl, a rhymed tap entering into a MULTIVERSE, chaste as the blending circles of moon, dust, sun... and mankind tries to understand this wonder of this fluid spectacle--- halo of my Andromeda crown...till a voice from Genesis echoes, ' Now the whole world has one language.' ............................. Thvia Shetley's The Cosmos Contest * Since 1924, astronomers believed there were nebulae outside the Milky Way. One of them was known as the Andromeda Submitted with revisions: 10/12/2017
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Haight Avatar
October 15, 2017 at 5:02 PM
Amazing poem, Nette! Congratulations on your podium win on this short list of winners! Hugs, Sandra
Sergi Avatar
October 14, 2017 at 7:29 AM
Congratulations ,nette A poem that echoes the universe!
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October 13, 2017 at 7:56 AM
Great personification of Andromeda, Nette - I love that you wrote this in first person. Congrats on your win!
Barden Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 5:21 AM
Wonderful write, Nette - enjoyed it very much! Congrats on your win! :-)
White Avatar
October 13, 2017 at 4:06 AM
Beautiful Nette, congratulations :)
Carmack Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 11:51 PM
Beautiful. Congrats on your win.
Sinha-Roy Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 10:02 PM
Congratulations, Nette on your wonderful win with an equally wonderful poem.
Shetley Avatar
October 12, 2017 at 9:41 PM
Thank you for your entry in my contest, Nette, and congratulations on your placement. This piece moved me.
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December 28, 2015 at 11:15 PM
Nette, Congratulations on your nice win. ~LINDA~
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December 28, 2015 at 10:29 PM
Nette,, Congrats on your Star People win. SKAT
A. Sharma Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 1:32 AM
Oops sorry nette... the comment meant for Laura popped up here.. this is an exquisite write.. congrats on great win!
A. Sharma Avatar
December 28, 2015 at 1:24 AM
Great take on the theme and a wonderful poetry Laura.. congrats on big win!
Haight Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 4:39 PM
So beautifully written, Nette, with amazing imagery. Congratulations on your win. Hugs, Sandra
Cheema Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 1:46 PM
A 7! Beautifully done! Congrats on your placement!
Tor Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 11:29 AM
nette a wonderful win!
Scars Avatar
December 27, 2015 at 11:15 AM
Nette..congrats on your well deserved win! *smiles* -luloo
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
December 25, 2015 at 5:48 AM
Nette, always a prima ballerina with your poetry!!! Maligayang PAsko!!! hugs~olive ELoisa =`)
Marcum Wong Avatar
December 24, 2015 at 10:43 AM
Wow Nette, this poem is impressive with your universal imagery. Breathtaking! I wish you and your family a Mele Kalikimaka my friend. Blessings and Aloha, Connie
Shariff Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 9:03 PM
Well written using words of wisdom - Spectacular imagery!
Bayles Avatar
December 21, 2015 at 3:43 PM
I like the imagery of this poem, very lively. Mike Bayles
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December 21, 2015 at 2:55 PM
- You are a star, Nette ..... beautiful - Good luck in the contest - Marry Christmas to you and your family - Best wishes for the new year 2016 - Christmas hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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