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And To Autumn Turns Spring

Karmic seeds once sown, Thought, I’d reap fruits by me grown, Spring came, soon was gone, And turned to summer too soon, And fruitless far my fortune! It dawned: I might sow, But it pays if I well know: My job’s just to sow, Man no more can than propose, Someone sits there to dispose. ______________________________ Rengay |16.02.2022| Poet’s note: A twelfth century poetic style in Japan, Rengay started as a collaborative form of poetry, with two stanzas, the first called Hokku, later became Haiku of seventeen syllables in three lines. The next stanza is a couplet of seven syllables each in both the lines.

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Date: 3/18/2022 11:01:00 PM
'Man no more can than propose, Someone sits there to dispose"..... Quite true, man can only sow seeds, what harvest we should reap is decided by a power above us. It seems that you experiment with new forms ! Well done !
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Date: 2/28/2022 4:07:00 PM
This is an awesome form I might like to try. Very well-written! This goes to my FAV.
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