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And They Flew

one day the flightless peacock got a message from above and when it filled his heart he gave the message to a dove when he received it he knew it was true this was something special and to all the world it should be flew the dove gave it to a crane and the crane gave it to a duck which went south for the winter where the message was also brought but then the dragon got word and he didn't like it at all he flew around the world saying the message was false but all the birds knew it and the woodpecker too the message of God's love is very, very true (This goes with a presentation of origami birds and a dragon that can flap their wings.)

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Date: 12/16/2023 4:47:00 PM
An interesting write, John ... Well done ... I have always wondered if animals can talk to each other ...
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Date: 3/25/2015 12:24:00 PM
Ahh!! I like this one ..I am glad that I chose it..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 3/25/2015 8:12:00 AM
Your talent and wit wrap themselves around your words and the effect is magic to the reader. Emile.
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Date: 12/25/2014 10:27:00 PM
I like the message John, Stopping by to say hi, and wish you the best... Enjoy your days and the coming New Year. Love ~LINDA~
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Date: 10/17/2014 10:09:00 AM
"but then the dragon got word and he didn't like it at all he flew around the world saying the message was false" (perhaps that is why God made the dragon fly John- in Appalachia the dragon flys purpose is to warn of the presence of a snake. I was swimming in a pond one time my brother Wade told me that.
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Date: 10/16/2014 9:44:00 PM
aha, I think I know what THIS is about. GREAT symbolic poem!!! Loved how the dove sent it to all the world. Or it should have been the dove!!! Very nice.
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Date: 10/16/2014 9:42:00 PM
yes, in response to what you said at my poem, rhubarb just is not found any more. But I had it last year in one of those brown sugar crumb crusts. OH MY was it ever delicious.
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Cindy Cayton
Date: 10/17/2014 10:11:00 AM
my cousin had some. Dad always liked that pie. I didn't like it but tried it.
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Cindy Cayton
Date: 10/17/2014 10:11:00 AM
You ever had Heirloom tomatoes? they are purple.
Date: 10/16/2014 5:05:00 AM
Ahh!! Enjoyed reading this one today..I am glad that I chose it to read..Thanks for the visit to my page..Well at least the one about Ebola got your attention..Yes, I believe that the end is drawing near but I don't know nor does anyone else..Sara
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Sara Kendrick
Date: 10/17/2014 2:12:00 PM
Thanks for Thanksgiving wishes..Sara
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Cindy Cayton
Date: 10/17/2014 10:13:00 AM
What Native Americans said has came to pass at the same time, about. Enjoy your Thanksgiving Sara.
Date: 10/15/2014 6:05:00 PM
A beautifully penned piece of free verse. Love the tale, the description and the inspiration. Well done my friend.
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