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And Then There Was You

I was going to wait Because that’s what I was taught. But then you came along. You made me feel safe And special. You made me want to do things I’ve never done before. I wanted you to know that I trust you completely. I wanted to give you My everything. You seemed excited When I finally told you I would do it. I was terrified But willing to make this sacrifice For you. October 8, 2016. That’s the night. It didn’t hurt as bad As they said it would. It felt wonderful. It was pleasurable, It was magnificent. It made me blossom Into a new me, An experienced me. And I didn’t even mind That I had just committed One of the most awful sins With you.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 4/18/2017 2:03:00 PM
It is not a sin to love. Great romantic poem.
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Date: 4/12/2017 2:28:00 PM
This is a poem of love, real love, but then you end by saying you committed a sin... Why a sin? It is a beautiful poem, about a beautiful moment. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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