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And, Then, I Sigh

I remember the day you were born Early on a snowy November morn And the day we brought you home When I wrote for you a lovely poem, and, then, I sigh. I rest my elbows on the windowsill Looking out over the meadow still Where you ran laughing, playing Your sweet brown pigtails splaying, and, then, I sigh. You said, “I am getting married, Dad,” And, true, he was a handsome lad I was proud you made a fine choice But, I recall the crack in your voice, and, then, I sigh. I look up and see a tracing in the sky My heart beats so, I think I will die The day when he took you so far away I felt like I was a forgotten castaway, and, then, I sigh. But you came home with my grandchild That sweet little girl so meek, so mild She comes to me with smiles and hugs Says, I love you, Gramps, then shrugs, and, then, I sigh.
THIRD PLACE WINNER written July 10, 2021 For "What Makes You Sigh" Poetry Contest Sponsored by Chantelle Anne Cooke

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Date: 7/15/2021 9:35:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a beautiful story/write. You must be very happy. Have a blessed day with this win........................
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/15/2021 11:01:00 AM
Thank you, Paula. I really appreciate your compliments. Yes, I was very satisfied with this write, and I felt like it was a winner, but I wasn't sure. Again, thanks.
Date: 7/15/2021 1:25:00 AM
Back to congratulate you, a well-deserved win!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/15/2021 9:13:00 AM
Terry, I appreciate your congrats. Thank you so much.
Date: 7/15/2021 12:49:00 AM
Wow! Beautiful, Milton, congratulations:)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/15/2021 9:13:00 AM
Thanks, Jo. I appreciate your thoughts.
Date: 7/14/2021 10:56:00 AM
Congratulations, Milton
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/14/2021 10:57:00 AM
Thanks so much for your notice, Rama. I appreciate your congrats.
Date: 7/14/2021 10:13:00 AM
Congratulations on your contest win with this so beautiful poem.
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Date: 7/14/2021 10:04:00 AM
All good things! The love of a grandchild is precious! Congratulations, Milton!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/14/2021 10:09:00 AM
Thanks so much for your thoughtful comment, Kim.
Date: 7/14/2021 9:46:00 AM
Beautifully penned. Congratulations!
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/14/2021 10:09:00 AM
Thanks, Christuraj. I appreciate your thoughts.
Date: 7/11/2021 9:11:00 AM
I have gone through same feelings as I watched my daughters growing up. Now I watch my Granddaughter only on Skype. Best Wishes
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/11/2021 9:17:00 AM
I know the feelings, Anisha. Somewhere along the way, they sort of grow distant from us, but we love them.
Date: 7/11/2021 1:31:00 AM
Excellent write Milton GL in the contest.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/11/2021 9:16:00 AM
Thanks so much, Terry. I hope it does well.
Date: 7/10/2021 12:13:00 PM
this is very touching, milton, and very beautifully written...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 7/10/2021 12:21:00 PM
Thank you so much, Ilene, for your thoughtful comment on my poem. I really appreciated it.

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