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An old cowboy still wore his spurs As he entered the cool dark bar. He brushed his jeans of cockle burrs, Waved his hat for a whiskey jar. He looked 'round at the Friday crowd, Smiled and recalled his younger day. And then he heard him brash and loud - A young cowboy with hell to pay. He slammed through the old batwing doors, Sat down at the old man's table. He said."Pop,I'll give you 'what fors' If you don't leave while you're able." And then the old man kinda smiled. He said, "Son,I'd leave were I you. Things 'round here are 'bout to get wild. You're 'bout to lose a tooth or two!" The young cowboy leaned back and grinned As the old man swung the bottle. They swore that you could feel the wind As he hit the chin full throttle. And then he laid there 'neath the table With a changed view of these old men. Don't take on more than you're able - You don't know where these guys have been. 4/17/2017 For contest And Then..

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Date: 5/2/2017 9:31:00 AM
Nicely written Larry.
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Date: 4/29/2017 12:40:00 PM
Nice won. Congratulations on your win.
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Date: 4/28/2017 3:38:00 PM
Great Write, Love it being an older in shape guy myself :)
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Date: 4/27/2017 10:50:00 AM
Great storytelling Larry!
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Date: 4/27/2017 10:48:00 AM
terrific write Larry, congratulations...
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Date: 4/27/2017 6:40:00 AM
Greetings, Larry. Congrats for your well-deserved second placement with this brilliant narrative!! ;-)
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Date: 4/26/2017 9:05:00 PM
Larry, I have often quoted the old man's adage to the younger set..."no amount of youth and exuberance will overcome old age and treachery". Enjoyed this one. thanks for submitting it to the contest
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/26/2017 9:52:00 PM
Thank you, John..Had not heard the old adage before and it does fit the poem! I like that!
Date: 4/17/2017 6:20:00 PM
great story, well told. best of luck in the contest...
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Larry Bradfield
Date: 4/18/2017 9:46:00 PM
Thanks, Ilene!!

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