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And Then-

they lowered his casket six feet down into the cold ground. They shoveled him under as I wept- and then the green grass grew over. I planted pretty flowers around his headstone and they soared high in the summer sun. One year, five, ten years and still I keep coming back to this place of tears, to weep. And then I lay on the green grass over him whispering my love to brittle bones buried six feet under. I am frozen in this past sorrow . . . and then, and then, and then. ___________________________ April 14, 2017 Verse/And Then Copyright Protected, ID 892441 And Then John Lawless Fifth Place

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Date: 5/2/2017 9:24:00 AM
Great poem BW. Love the unconventional layout.
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Date: 4/29/2017 12:43:00 PM
Wow. For me this is the winner in the competition. Congratulations, Kai
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Date: 4/27/2017 7:48:00 AM
Congrats Broken Wings. This is sad, but realistic and personal; and it relates to all of us. It is also well written my friend.
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Date: 4/27/2017 6:41:00 AM
I felt your heart-brokenness when I read this sad verse..... Congrats BW, for your placement in the contest
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Date: 4/26/2017 11:50:00 PM
Wonderful way to do the challenge. You came up with a beauty of a poem, Constance. Big congrats for your win.
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Date: 4/26/2017 11:47:00 PM
Congratulations on a beautiful poem. I was particularly impressed with how you made the subtle shift from past to present tense. That's something that trips me up all the time. Lovely write, Constance.
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Date: 4/26/2017 9:16:00 PM
Each sunrise lacking a shadow....a constant reminder....thanks for entering the contest BW
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Date: 4/22/2017 10:57:00 PM
You have captured here what I seem to do daily for my son. I read it numerous times over, each time remembering... Thank you.
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Date: 4/14/2017 4:31:00 PM
A hauntingly beautiful piece...it almost feels like a ballad. lynnxxx sending you a basketful of Easter blessings:)
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Date: 4/14/2017 3:35:00 PM
A sadness overcomes me reading your poetic hymn.
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Book: Shattered Sighs