James Fraser Poet Rhyme

And the Rose Faded

Once upon a time
In many peoples lives
Males met a female
And they turned into wives

The garden was so fertile
Many seeds were sown
So many lawns were laid
Our spirits having grown

Undulations rise
As relationships recede
Do we finally reach
That point of exceed

This garden can no longer
Grow green, prosper and true
It's like the Autumn season
It can die in front of you

Ones soul can be so broken
Just like it has been raided
When your levy breaks
You know your rose has faded


 

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Jo Hayton October 23, 2009 at 1:55 PM It's like the Autumn season, it can die infront of you, I absolutely adore this poem James, and the lines above especially, excellent excellent write, I looked for your roses.. Thankyou for your lovely comments on my poem, love Jo xx

Doris Culverhouse October 22, 2009 at 7:48 PM nicley penned, great work

Pamela Griffiths October 22, 2009 at 6:41 AM I love this poem James, it does relate to many people and myself included. Pam

Carolyn Devonshire October 22, 2009 at 6:07 AM The roses fade in many relationships, James, but the garden is filled with beautiful flowers. Hope that helps a bit. I know this lovely poem comes straight from your heart. Truly a brilliant analogy! Love you, Carolyn

John Freeman October 21, 2009 at 6:52 PM Amazing truth in this one James, the rose does so often fade. I've enjoyed your poetry tonight very much. Sincerely, Moses

Kim Hilliker October 21, 2009 at 6:13 PM I know exactly what you mean, James. relationships are disposable.