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And the Bubble Bursts

An illusion of euphoric freedom, a bubble that encloses them from all sides and they float in it awed by its iridescence. Swirling rainbow images could be seen on its layer, miming untold tales of enchantment with each lurching bounce as it levitates higher. When actually it is a death trap, a spell that isolates them from reality and soon they succumb to destructive compulsion. Itches of dark temptation lead to scary scars; more they scratch, worst the wounds become. By the time the bubble bursts, they are already dead.
Date: 05/01/2018

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Date: 8/10/2022 4:00:00 AM
Wow! A cautionary tale! Great reading you this morning, Afzal!
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Date: 4/20/2019 4:01:00 AM
Such an ubiquitous feeling you’ve created. Love it and thank you.
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Date: 10/24/2018 6:24:00 AM
Hi Afzal, a powerful write and a strong message on your topic. It is so easy to fall into an addiction and only if you are very lucky can you escape it. An honest, real write on the subject. Have a wonderful Wednesday. your friend....Mike.
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Date: 8/30/2018 3:10:00 AM
So very true, Afzal, yet many are trapped in it..
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Date: 7/9/2018 3:11:00 AM
We are often lulled into a false sense of security as you illustrate with metaphors in your first stanza. A chilling message Afzal...beautifully composed! : )
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Date: 6/23/2018 11:09:00 AM
Ahh this is a really wonderful poem with a strong message, you see the first time you have drugs, it s like you are in heaven, slowly slowly your body start to get used to it coz it takes you out of your problems and gives you piece, and when we realize that it eating us, it s perhaps too late and we don t have strength to quit then, best advise, always stay away from it, good luck
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Date: 6/22/2018 5:54:00 PM
wow, STRONG writing with a strong message. I really liked seeing this one today. WElcome back!! Thanks for your sweet comments.
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