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And Suddenly I Was Me

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I remember when
Suddenly I came of age

There was a clear moment of
That was then and this is now

I had my wings
And urge to fly
I was fourteen

There was a world
Beyond the nest

I owned a blanket
And a ghetto blaster
It was the summer of ‘72

I had the taste of freedom on my lips
And sunshine on my back

Dreams to dream
The world to conquer

Life was sweet
There was no looking back

I had come of age
That was then and this was now

One day I was a child
The next I was me

The me I had become
The me I would become

Shaped by my past
Thrust in my prime
The me I would grow into

Adventures to pursue
The shoes I had to fill

I had come of age
That was then and in my head
Then is still forever now

I was fourteen
The me I would grow into
The taste of freedom on my lips



Read on air by invitation  ~  April 8, 2021  'LATE NIGHT POETS'

AP : Honorable Mention 2021

Posted on March 27, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Date: 5/12/2021 2:00:00 AM
Wow! So delighted am I to listen to you in your expressive vocal reading of your poem.God bless you.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/12/2021 6:05:00 AM
Thank you so much for your lovely comment, Beata ~
Date: 5/10/2021 3:32:00 PM
Excellent -- and a pleasure to hear your reading!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/10/2021 5:50:00 PM
Thank you so much, Leo ~
Date: 5/10/2021 2:48:00 PM
Your expressive reading really enhanced this beautifully composed poem, Line.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/10/2021 5:51:00 PM
Thank you very much, Wendy ~
Date: 5/10/2021 1:13:00 PM
Line, so beautifully read, I loved hearing you read your poem, you have the perfect voice for reading poetry, and of course your words are so meaningful, love _Constance
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/10/2021 1:58:00 PM
Thank you very much, Constance. I'm sure you would be awesome ~
Date: 5/9/2021 11:03:00 PM
Awesome, Line. Hugs Eve
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Line Gauthier
Date: 5/10/2021 5:31:00 AM
Thank you very much, Eve ~
Date: 3/30/2021 3:47:00 AM
"One day I was a child The next I was me" absolutely true! Bravo Line!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/30/2021 6:01:00 AM
thanks, Caren ~
Date: 3/29/2021 8:44:00 PM
Whoa! Fourteen?!! So revealing! Today, fourteen, at least in the Chicago area, is still a snowflake needing safe spaces and stuffed animals -- except for the gang-bangers and car-jackers, of course, who are 'wise beyond their years.' Interesting to ponder this one, for sure! :) gw
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/30/2021 6:00:00 AM
Thank you so much, Gershon.
Date: 3/27/2021 12:02:00 PM
I recall those days, I miss them, my body misses them more. A nice walk through the past.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/28/2021 7:08:00 AM
thanks, ML ~
Date: 3/27/2021 7:29:00 AM
Happy memories Line, bet it feels like yesterday. Tom
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/27/2021 7:44:00 AM
Absolutely, you know it ~
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