And Still I Drive - Part Two

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I have decided i may wish to add further verses to this poem. 

Stars fall under failing skies...stars fall...stars fall...
But stars do not cry.
Into Ochs valley, through the Vale of White Horse...prancing 
besides a Dragons Hill;
It was here that a Roundhead - did a Royalist Cavaliers blood in 
Oxons streets so spill!
Where Great Alfred strove to drive out the Dane and his Law;
And blazing fires were lit to roar in the open grates of Christ churchs 
Great Hall.
Stars fall under failing skies...stars fall...stars fall...
But stars do not deny.
Along the ever stretching A34 littered with the slaughtered carcasses of the
Daily score;
Over Royal Berkshires balding heights, where from every bush 
And every turn,
Reflecting back from my glowing headlights
Sharp green piercing eyes - cunning Red fox that so discerns.

Stars fall under failing skies...stars fall...stars fall...
And still i drive.
Between the clearing acres of ten thousand gnarled boughs
That once did so ably fashion for great Windsors mighty beams.
Steering along Newburys pass where Civil war was played out thrice
Against the brow:
Same old crowd - bloody encounters and fisticuffs - same age old
Greed driven schemes!
Stars fall under failing skies...stars fall...stars fall...
And still i drive.
At the approaching roundabout i must begin to slow -
First exit left - M40 - and steadily onward i accelerate to go;
For i have the Immortal Bards Warwickshire set within my determined mind -
My own forlorn loves hopes...lost...now far distant...long gone behind.

Stars fall under failing skies...stars fall...stars fall...
And still i drive.
Wide motorways with boastful, imposing overhead gantry signs:
Grandly heralding the names of "just up ahead" places
Boldly framed upon blue panels within white trim designs,
Straddling wide lanes - huge and brightly lit,
Prompt and remind the tourist of the "sights" they must surely visit.
Stars fall under failing skies...stars fall...stars fall...
But stars do not lie.
Here the reflective waters of Shakespeares Avon still peacefully flow
That pushed upon the old mills rustic wheels so many forgotten years ago.
Where, carting slowly, the Hathaways would come for flour, or so it was said,
To bring back unto Newlands farm to bake and offer prayers 
For their daily bread.

Stars fall under failing skies...stars fall...stars fall...
But stars do not die.
Pittering hail blows across my glass windscreen - the swinging rhythmatic blade
sweeping it clean;
And staring, as if caught in a trance, my mind casts back
To that last meal we ate - you on the settle - i by the exposed and varnished 
Brick stack;
In your warm, comfy little lounge loudly arguing back and forth over this and that!
Stars fall under failing skies...stars fall...stars fall...
But stars do not cry.
Unfurling before me the M6 toll that impedes my progress upon this hour 
So late,
As queuing, my whirling thoughts drift again to the moment, where in silence,
I had quietly stood at your little open gate:
Incandescent with cruel stabbing words you did me so violently berate;
Crashing door slamming tightly shut - sealed now upon a doomed forgone fate!

Stars fall under failing skies...stars fall...stars fall...
But stars do not deny.
The barrier rises as once again the blizzard contrives...
Whereupon, engaging the gears and steadily revving the engine,
I Resume the drive;
Speeding towards Staffordshires potteries of ceramic plates:
Pattern ware for commoner, landed gentry, Lords and Ladies, 
And lofty estates.
Stars fall under failing skies...stars fall...stars fall...
And still i drive.
The monumental journey of one hundred leagues is nearly all but done,
The resolute chimneys and Bottle kilns i will soon outrun.
For now a sailing Moon begins to shallow and fade -
Whilst gathering together her skirts -
A final encore before daintily retiring from centre stage.

Stars fall under failing skies...stars fall...stars fall...
But i know not why.
Hesitant grey light in the wings steps aside bleak and rugged tors;
Dawns waking orchestral chorus prepares to perform sweet clarion chords;
Beacons that coursed constant along my long troubled way,
Soon to be gradually extinguished at the onset of another slowly waking
Cheshire day.
Stars fall under failing skies...stars fall...stars fall...
But stars should not cry. (For men do not cry! Do they?)
The painted black and white metal railings that secure the pastoral herds
Of the shire
Are adorned with the icicles and hard frost from a fierce biting ire;
And as Moonlights diminished beams disappear behind thick drawing drapes
- Finally drawn -
Back in the land of my fathers fathers to which i am forever inextricably sworn!!


                                Forgive me, Julia!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 4/9/2015 12:18:00 PM
I loved part 1 and I loved part 2 no less. I have already faved part 1 so I am happy to say I will fav part 2. By the way I really like that you kept all your I's in reference to yourself an unusual small I! A great touch that adds just one more layer to this multi layered write. Thank you for a great ride John! A Huge Fan Always, Armand.
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Date: 4/10/2015 12:08:00 AM
My most sincerest thanks, Armand!! I am very pleased that you enjoyed the 2nd part as much as the first. Your friend always! :) john.
Date: 4/3/2015 6:23:00 PM
G'day John... your observance, recalling history, and landmarks, has certainly got me feeling I was a ghost in the passenger seat on your long journey. A very enjoyable read to complete your journey - Lindsay
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Date: 4/4/2015 3:10:00 PM
Thanks, Lindsay. That is a novel and intriguing thought! A ghost in the back seat recalling history as it is driven through the remnants of what has gone before...makes a good subject for a poem - Methinks!! Lol! Best regards, mate!! :) john.
Date: 3/7/2015 5:03:00 AM
"And still i drive" makes the work, don't you think? Julia, with admiration for your two poems.
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Date: 3/7/2015 12:47:00 PM
You are spot on, in my opinion, with this comment, Julia. I think it is important as it keeps the momentum of the poem going. It is that feeling of "reluctant, saddened flight" that i tried to convey. Well done...And many thanks!! :) john.
Date: 3/6/2015 1:11:00 PM
Thank you, William. I am most pleased you enjoyed the drive! It certainly was an epic journey - and a sad one. But hey...thats life! Best regards! :) john.
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Date: 3/6/2015 12:05:00 PM
What an epic journey of nature and history combined!. I must read it all again off course, for it's beauty is interlocked with such fascinating detail. Truly amazing John!. A very well deserved *7*, my friend!
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Date: 3/3/2015 1:34:00 AM
I seem to remember this had a different ending a few days back. This far better though. You have painted us a story of present and flashbacks with great imagery. I am slowly relearning the many facets of poetry. Awesome, 7+++!. Kim
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Date: 3/3/2015 2:02:00 AM
Thanks, Kim. Nice to see you again! Yes, it is far better now. I have been busy editing, deleting, adding, re-editing...and so forth and so forth. I think i have now just about nailed it - hopefully!! All the very best!! :) john. P.s I may well add a few more verses yet.
Date: 3/2/2015 3:38:00 PM
ohh mmy, john.. pensive, visually and viscerally fantastic ---we sometimes can't let go of gripping moments we love.. enjoyed the repetitive phrases.. epic!.. huggs
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Date: 3/3/2015 1:57:00 AM
Thanks, Nette. I have worked hard on it! I am pleased that you enjoyed the journey...it was long and arduous!! My very best regards!! :) john.
Date: 3/2/2015 7:28:00 AM
skillful, erudite and well woven john. a glimpse of three souls seeking a feather of the simurgh's tail?
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Date: 3/2/2015 1:02:00 PM
Thank you, Steven...you are most generous!! I confess you have educated me somewhat with your kind comments - I had never heard of the mythical Simurgh before! Allow me to say i am very pleased to have made your acquaintance...Best regards!! :) john.
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