And So It Once Was Said
It was a dark and stormy night
Too cliche
Once upon a careless whisper
Too sappy
And she bled from a thouand knives
Too desperate
So she caught all the little butterflies
Too .......... horrible
Copyright © Hat Bueckert | Year Posted 2007
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