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And So It Ends

She’s crying With indignant eyes And a tumultuous heart He’s sighing With restrained thighs And a perplexed start It slams With a thunderous noise And a conspiring choice Do I end this mess? – Or give it a Holy redress? She seems not to care He seems to dare From here, I see she watches I see he clutches – His heavy heart beneath his prideful fear Her heart is pumping blood at double speed His soul is giving in to fleshy greed She’s waiting vehemently for a beep He’s composing speeches way too deep As her waiting become just hopes And his notes stay within his heart’s ropes They long and want The affection their soul taunts Questions are borne out of anger Silence is carved out of disdain Abandon is stemming from his inner perceived power Regret is flowing from her deepest sincere pain His grudge; her shame Her hopes; his name The battle of beauty and ***** The throttle of merry or junk Waiting and longing Concluding and condemning She is closing her heart’s door She is wishing she had more The struggle of egos is designed The joggle of love and his pride Writing and cleaning Creating and recounting He is tossing several thoughts He is hoping she will have more And so it ends He’s reuniting his heart with his feet He’s taking a great chance at his last feat She’s clearing her heart of clogged rage She’s opening her arms to love’s undying age As the heavens pours out grace – From where I stand; an amazing space, He tilts his heart to reveal remorse She expunges doubt of any course He gapes at My perfect creature He wonders how blissful his future – Would be with this sculpted beauty Of the Celestials’ duty I sit and watch, I stare and smile At earth’s connection from countless miles And so it ends like it never went sour Another union as Paradise’s flower! © Tamara Ghariokwu 18th November, 2010.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/29/2010 7:56:00 AM
welcome to the soup
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Date: 12/24/2010 6:07:00 AM
I really like the rhythm it has when you read it. Good job.
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Date: 12/15/2010 8:26:00 AM
good job! I enjoyed the many expressions you used.
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Date: 12/14/2010 4:39:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Tamara. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors. You can look to the left side of the main page and find lots of information on PoetrySoup including contests by members of PoetrySoup and contests by the PoetrySoup site also. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/14/2010 3:01:00 AM
Thanks alot Anthony Nutter. I really do appreciate.
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Date: 12/14/2010 2:59:00 AM
An epic write excellently done, enjoyed this read.
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