And So It Begins

when a little bird starts to fly,
when a baby stands on its own,
when an old seed pierces the earth,
when sun shines on a rainy day,
when a poor fish escapes trawling,
A ray of hope emerges,
that reconciles dispute between heart and mind
that heals the wounds inside my heart
that waters the plants wilting inside me
that brings back the spring to my barren land
that helps me nudge the success
and so it begins...

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Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Dietrich Avatar
March 10, 2019 at 1:18 PM
oh gosh, i wish it had been in the contest because for sure, this is a winner!
Pandit Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 7:12 AM
Excellent in every way..kudos for your originality, Supraja..no doubt you will win.
Kannan Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 8:12 PM
Thank you so much for your encouraging words. I forgot to enter this in contest and the contest has closed now.
Trifiatis Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 6:10 AM
How inspiring the rising of hope's sun in your beautiful poem my dearest , Supraja! Loved it!
Kannan Avatar
February 12, 2019 at 8:12 PM
Thank you so much. Glad you loved it.
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