And Justice For None

WHAT A WONDERFUL WORLD (THE REWRITE)

Children hidden against a darkened sky

A cup of river foaming at the mouth
Poles where heated days continue to rise

Pigmentation dictates shaded colours of tell tale lies 
Blacks on our streets under broken white lines
Shadows of leaves against migrants stripped of bark

Women’s rights written on sheets with naked ink
Hired guns bought -streets with unrestricted laws
Voices yell putrid words -controlled by foreign hands
Fires rage -our Mother’s belly flat with nothing to bear

Suited Men swirl about with noxious airs
Walk blindly into an imaginary Sun longtime set
Sink into the plastic remnants of bottles drank
The dew on their skin stings like acid spilt
Breathing particles drawn with charcoal pencils lit

And I think to myself what a Trumped up World

08/27/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 7/28/2019 10:51:00 AM
Very strong emotions, I look around me and see the pervasive degradation of the societies in which we live, but then I look into my daughter's eyes and find a grain of hope and the beauty of what our world could be.
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Date: 7/28/2019 12:48:00 PM
Gorgeous words.Thank you.
Date: 11/2/2018 2:56:00 AM
so powerfully penned Armand I can'r believe I missed this first time round and its wonderful to see this featured on the home page:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 10/21/2018 10:27:00 PM
beautiful poem// This world is heaven for superpower and living morgue for poor hunger! justice is just ice on the board of gambling dice!
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Date: 9/3/2018 12:43:00 AM
Pow! Whap! Umph! Well said; you've hit your target right in the center. Well done.
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Date: 8/29/2018 12:02:00 AM
Love how you did this! I wonder, if this is the burning of all that is old, to bring forth something new, I doubt it but one can dream!
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Date: 8/28/2018 6:49:00 PM
Powerful write, Armand.
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Date: 8/28/2018 2:50:00 AM
good write...that is almost a medieval old west
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