And Into the Forest I Go

AND INTO THE FOREST I GO, TO LOSE MY MIND AND FIND MY SOUL…
John Muir 


A cool forest trail beckons and begs
Come, stretch your tired legs

     Feel the cool descend upon your shoulders
     Lifting tensions as big as boulders

          Walk among the spires of tall tree friends
          Over streams or through meadows and glens

          Eagles nest high above touching tree crown
          Hear owls hoot-hoot and look all around

     Still your breath.  Let silence settle like a glove
     He’s hiding in dim shelter, three branches above

At home in my soul I feel with time thus spent
Breathing in peace the forest has lent

                          Forest
                  Welcome respite
            Walking, hearing, feeling 
             A gentle lifting of spirits
                         Verdant 


I used a couplet form with a cinquain form at the end
written 8-9-2019

Writing Challenge 1, August 2019 - Just Write     4th place

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Romios Avatar
August 16, 2019 at 4:57 PM
Really lovely, write,Jeane! Congratulations on winning. Panagiota I have been to Muir Woods Breathtaking!
Krutsinger Avatar
August 13, 2019 at 10:57 PM
Beautifully done! You deserved this win!
Adams Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 8:32 PM
Great use of the different forms, love the images in this beautiful write! Congrats on your win :) hugs
La France Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 7:37 PM
Jeanne congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write
Scars Avatar
August 12, 2019 at 6:09 PM
great usage of different forms! lovely poem, congrats :)-luloo
Laurie Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 10:43 PM
Hello Jeanne … with a stream through a valley, there is nothing so calming as to be bushwalking there and feeling nature - thank you Jeanne - Lindsay
Rodrigues Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 5:40 PM
You had me at John Muir! I love the forest! I wouldn’t want to do without trees!
Pandit Avatar
August 10, 2019 at 12:36 PM
A delightful journey through the forest--I enjoyed this beautiful poem Jeanne--all the best.
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