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And Into the Forest I Go

AND INTO THE FOREST I GO, TO LOSE MY MIND AND FIND MY SOUL… John Muir A cool forest trail beckons and begs Come, stretch your tired legs Feel the cool descend upon your shoulders Lifting tensions as big as boulders Walk among the spires of tall tree friends Over streams or through meadows and glens Eagles nest high above touching tree crown Hear owls hoot-hoot and look all around Still your breath. Let silence settle like a glove He’s hiding in dim shelter, three branches above At home in my soul I feel with time thus spent Breathing in peace the forest has lent Forest Welcome respite Walking, hearing, feeling A gentle lifting of spirits Verdant I used a couplet form with a cinquain form at the end written 8-9-2019 Writing Challenge 1, August 2019 - Just Write 4th place Sponsor, Dear Heart

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Date: 8/16/2019 4:57:00 PM
Really lovely, write,Jeane! Congratulations on winning. Panagiota I have been to Muir Woods Breathtaking!
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Date: 8/13/2019 10:57:00 PM
Beautifully done! You deserved this win!
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Date: 8/12/2019 8:32:00 PM
Great use of the different forms, love the images in this beautiful write! Congrats on your win :) hugs
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Date: 8/12/2019 7:37:00 PM
Jeanne congratulations on your win in my writing challenge with this wonderful write
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Date: 8/12/2019 6:09:00 PM
great usage of different forms! lovely poem, congrats :)-luloo
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Date: 8/10/2019 10:43:00 PM
Hello Jeanne … with a stream through a valley, there is nothing so calming as to be bushwalking there and feeling nature - thank you Jeanne - Lindsay
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Date: 8/10/2019 5:40:00 PM
You had me at John Muir! I love the forest! I wouldn’t want to do without trees!
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Date: 8/10/2019 12:36:00 PM
A delightful journey through the forest--I enjoyed this beautiful poem Jeanne--all the best.
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