And I Was Judged

I was in hurry
did not drop coin in bowl
And beggar judged
I was pauper..............

I was rehearsing 
in make-up for beggars dialogue
And  dropping coin passer by judged
I was beggar........................

I was wiping my tears
hearing good news of moms recovery
And relative judged
I lost my mom.................

I was laughing alone 
in mental hospital on old joke
And hospital inmates judged
I was insane.................

I was holding trophy
won by son in sports
And media persons judged
I was winner ......................

I was holding hand-cuffs
of police friend busy pissing
And all in toilets judged
I was criminal............

NAUGHTIEST ........

I was in brothel
To retrieve drunk friend
And other friend judged
I was having fun.....................

© Hitendra Mehta  
For Members Contest – “Here comes the Judge” by Joe Flach

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/20/2011 12:45:00 AM
wow wow wow, you really thought up an awesome way to do that difficult contest. I sure hope this wins (and if it was already judged,it sure as heck SHOULD win!) Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/3/2011 1:28:00 PM
Be safe as u travel Hitendra and appreciate your warm and always welcome comments with encouragement too..luv..
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Date: 2/3/2011 9:33:00 AM
Last one surely doesn't sound like a place to have fun so definitely misjudged..Good one on a topic that needs to be discussed..Sara
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Date: 2/3/2011 6:25:00 AM
Hitendra this is an amazing write my friend.. totally depicts how things get misconstrued in life by other people judging something they know nothing of... a superb entry and much success in the contest my friend... truly a special write ..thankxx for sharing.. hope all is well with u ...
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Date: 2/2/2011 3:40:00 PM
Absolutely stunning entry for the contest, with an intellectual humor, Hitendra.
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Date: 2/2/2011 12:55:00 PM
Very funny. Good luck in the contest...Jimmy
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