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I was in hurry did not drop coin in bowl And beggar judged I was pauper.............. I was rehearsing in make-up for beggars dialogue And dropping coin passer by judged I was beggar........................ I was wiping my tears hearing good news of moms recovery And relative judged I lost my mom................. I was laughing alone in mental hospital on old joke And hospital inmates judged I was insane................. I was holding trophy won by son in sports And media persons judged I was winner ...................... I was holding hand-cuffs of police friend busy pissing And all in toilets judged I was criminal............ NAUGHTIEST ........ I was in brothel To retrieve drunk friend And other friend judged I was having fun..................... © Hitendra Mehta For Members Contest – “Here comes the Judge” by Joe Flach

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/20/2011 12:45:00 AM
wow wow wow, you really thought up an awesome way to do that difficult contest. I sure hope this wins (and if it was already judged,it sure as heck SHOULD win!) Luv, Andrea
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Date: 2/3/2011 1:28:00 PM
Be safe as u travel Hitendra and appreciate your warm and always welcome comments with encouragement too..luv..
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Date: 2/3/2011 9:33:00 AM
Last one surely doesn't sound like a place to have fun so definitely misjudged..Good one on a topic that needs to be discussed..Sara
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Date: 2/3/2011 6:25:00 AM
Hitendra this is an amazing write my friend.. totally depicts how things get misconstrued in life by other people judging something they know nothing of... a superb entry and much success in the contest my friend... truly a special write ..thankxx for sharing.. hope all is well with u ...
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Date: 2/2/2011 3:40:00 PM
Absolutely stunning entry for the contest, with an intellectual humor, Hitendra.
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Date: 2/2/2011 12:55:00 PM
Very funny. Good luck in the contest...Jimmy
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