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(Rewrite of an old poem)

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Beneath the yawning, azure skies of Earth,
          We left our seed to wend the Sea of Suns,
               And prove the binding mettle of our worth,
     Beyond the sullied world we'd left undone.

Across the Great Expanse we bounded, free
          To stretch the limits of our brains and bones
               Though sailing 'cross that ancient, starlit sea
     We heard the gods of ages yawp and moan.

We plunged an aching void of endless night,
          Through spinning rainbow nebulae of death,
               To wondrous planets, multi-hued and bright,
     But none with Terra's sweet, enchanting breath.

Ten thousand worlds of mystery, we found
          Grand vistas, picturesque, for us to roam,
               Yet in the end, we turned our trek around, 
     Still yearning for those colors of our home.

To wade again, the meadows of our birth ...
          Beneath the yawning, azure skies of Earth.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019



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Date: 8/26/2021 10:23:00 PM
'Yet in the end, we turned our trek around, Still yearning for those colors of our home.' - Nostalgic? Beautiful. Congratulations on your win!
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Date: 7/31/2021 5:26:00 AM
So beautiful, Greg! Though we long to travel through the sea of stars, we always long for the touch of grass in our own piece of earth! God bless and congrats!
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Date: 7/30/2021 8:34:00 PM
Very beautiful and creative write. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/9/2020 2:43:00 PM
Enjoyed this fantastical flight to deep space and back, dear Bard. "Through spinning rainbow nebulae of death, / To wondrous planets, multi-hued and bright", yet always missing the unique colors of beloved Terra Firma. Great first line to refrain as the ending line to complete the journey. Love it! ~ John
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Date: 1/5/2020 11:07:00 PM
Hi Gregory, Congratulations Gregory. I love the way your poem takes us into deep space then in the ending lines brings us home. Really wonderful write.
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Date: 1/4/2020 7:41:00 PM
Gregory this was beautiful! Congratulations on your placement!;)
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Date: 1/1/2020 1:21:00 AM
This is gorgeous Greg! A fave for me. Hau'oli Makahiki Hou! xxoo
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Date: 12/31/2019 10:54:00 PM
Exceptional poetry or else I have never read any. Second and third stanza especially to set me in awe my friend. A fav....
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