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And He'Ll Be Mine

I saw him look at me, I saw him look twice! I'd love for him to ask me, Oh, it would be so nice! Oh! Perfect timing! Here is a slow song! Finally, it felt like The wait was so long! Whats this? Why didn't he ask? Was he afraid? And then right there, My hope began to fade. I saw him dancing With another girl, The thought of it Made me want to hurl. But I love him! How can this be? Why did he ask her? Why did he not ask me? Am I too ugly? Too fat? I wasn't going to dance by myself, So I sat. A second seemed like a minute, A minute seemed like an hour. Oh! My night Turned very sour. And then I thought, I shall not whine! Eventually they'll break up, And he'll be mine!

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Date: 2/14/2011 4:22:00 PM
Bobby Rydell sings in his song "Forget Him". That is good advice. Chances are, you have no physical defects. It's just that the competition out there is stiff. There's a man out there for you. Just keep looking. You describe everything here quite well with some good rhyming.
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