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And He Started Caressing

And he started caressing her face Between her two brows his fingers stopped momentarily Causing her to open her dreamy eyes questionably Demanding more tip-toeing of his fingers downwards Eventually his fingers stopped at the softness of her lips.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 8/16/2013 2:00:00 AM
...and she started cajoling...
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Date: 3/4/2013 12:06:00 PM
WOW! This is awesome! :) It caught me by surprise!
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Date: 12/11/2012 9:46:00 AM
mmmmm..........nice!!
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Date: 12/7/2012 6:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Any 5 Lines" contest Cash. Love Carol
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Date: 12/6/2012 9:51:00 AM
Sensual and so romantic..bravo
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Date: 12/2/2012 6:29:00 PM
KASH.. CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful poem... take care~PD
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Date: 12/2/2012 5:33:00 PM
Intimace the main ingredent.
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Date: 12/2/2012 2:28:00 PM
the words are so warm, to bring on the storm, when the heart melts, and building the steam...love it mate
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Date: 12/2/2012 7:42:00 AM
congrats on a great win kash
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Date: 12/2/2012 7:09:00 AM
oh I am all tingly now Kash reading this romantic interlude piece .. nice to know I can still blush at beautiful words of love ..luv..
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Date: 12/1/2012 5:22:00 PM
ok, I see now. You must have entered her contest right as it was closing. Lucky you to get it in right on time!! soupmail
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Date: 12/1/2012 5:16:00 PM
I am looking down and seeing lovely and romantic in the other comments!!! also I am seeing this won a contest. Which one??? Congratulations, Kash.
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Date: 12/1/2012 5:14:00 PM
this is SO lovely. So romantic. You are not the usual male author of love poems. You understand the romantic woman, Kash.
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Date: 12/1/2012 5:08:00 PM
This is really lovely kash, I love the romanticism which create tenderly within abc verses :D, and thank you for your comment in my page, it is really uplifting :D - hug, Yanny
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Date: 12/1/2012 3:35:00 PM
Lovely and romantic write,Kash..Congrats on your well deserved win....
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Date: 12/1/2012 7:25:00 AM
Big congratulations on your winning place Kash xx
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Date: 12/1/2012 6:56:00 AM
It took me a moment to realize that u wrote in A B C form...very strong work from the romantic writer in you...Congrats on painting the perfect prelude to a kiss...
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Date: 11/30/2012 5:40:00 PM
very very lovely!
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Date: 11/30/2012 5:23:00 PM
Congratulations on your very well written poem in Debbie Guzzi contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/30/2012 3:55:00 PM
Now here is a gentleman, someone who can woo in word and deed..and present the scene in language all can enjoy. Please do enter my next 6 line contest...Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 11/30/2012 2:37:00 PM
This is quite the sensual write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and wondrous poem this afternoon! What a powerfully romantic and passionate piece, Great Work!!
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