And He Started Caressing

And he started caressing her face
Between her two brows his fingers stopped momentarily
Causing her to open her dreamy eyes questionably
Demanding more tip-toeing of his fingers downwards
Eventually his fingers stopped at the softness of her lips.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Kithinji Avatar
August 16, 2013 at 2:00 AM
...and she started cajoling...
Manassian Avatar
March 4, 2013 at 12:06 PM
WOW! This is awesome! :) It caught me by surprise!
Richards Avatar
December 11, 2012 at 9:46 AM
mmmmm..........nice!!
Brown Avatar
December 7, 2012 at 6:01 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Debbie Guzzi's "Any 5 Lines" contest Cash. Love Carol
Chircop Avatar
December 6, 2012 at 9:51 AM
Sensual and so romantic..bravo
A   Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 6:29 PM
KASH.. CONGRATULATIONS with your wonderful poem... take care~PD
Johnson Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 2:28 PM
the words are so warm, to bring on the storm, when the heart melts, and building the steam...love it mate
May Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 7:42 AM
congrats on a great win kash
Sweetheart Avatar
December 2, 2012 at 7:09 AM
oh I am all tingly now Kash reading this romantic interlude piece .. nice to know I can still blush at beautiful words of love ..luv..
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 5:22 PM
ok, I see now. You must have entered her contest right as it was closing. Lucky you to get it in right on time!! soupmail
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 5:16 PM
I am looking down and seeing lovely and romantic in the other comments!!! also I am seeing this won a contest. Which one??? Congratulations, Kash.
Dietrich Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 5:14 PM
this is SO lovely. So romantic. You are not the usual male author of love poems. You understand the romantic woman, Kash.
Widjanarko Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 5:08 PM
This is really lovely kash, I love the romanticism which create tenderly within abc verses :D, and thank you for your comment in my page, it is really uplifting :D - hug, Yanny
Arowolo Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 3:35 PM
Lovely and romantic write,Kash..Congrats on your well deserved win....
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 7:25 AM
Big congratulations on your winning place Kash xx
Song Avatar
December 1, 2012 at 6:56 AM
It took me a moment to realize that u wrote in A B C form...very strong work from the romantic writer in you...Congrats on painting the perfect prelude to a kiss...
Bauer Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 5:40 PM
very very lovely!
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 5:23 PM
Congratulations on your very well written poem in Debbie Guzzi contest. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Guzzi Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 3:55 PM
Now here is a gentleman, someone who can woo in word and deed..and present the scene in language all can enjoy. Please do enter my next 6 line contest...Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Sivey Avatar
November 30, 2012 at 2:37 PM
This is quite the sensual write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this delightful and wondrous poem this afternoon! What a powerfully romantic and passionate piece, Great Work!!
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