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And Death I Think Is No Parenthesis

oh, how i wish i could write like the wonderfully weird e.e. cummings but the right words somehow escape me left only with personal shortcomings it’s clear, i’m no Shakespeare, Keats, Poe, or Byron though heed my many utterances as the call of the prating siren so let the verses flow not only with gestured speech but with sentiment shown to all that my words may reach a simple tale of a forgotten adoration and missing someone so dear-- sadness and longing just to find a tangible reason to remain here let the memories come flooding back like a pint-up raging stream trying to make sense of my agony and all that we see or seem is it wrong to find comfort in pain awake forever in a sweet unrest can a sorrowful heart ever truly gain let the words be written and never again fear that thy heart could forget, thy spirit deceive all those who find beauty in drear although the torment and anguish may never fully cease a lover’s ear will hear the lowest sound, one day, the heart will find its inner peace and in the end, amid the truth when your soul feels used up and small never forget the moments when love is the whole and more than all *I wrote this poem on April 16, 2021, as part of a ’30 days of poetry’ challenge. This was day 16 and the prompt was: Read 3 poems by the same poet then write a poem in a similar style. I read three random poems by e.e. cummings and while I didn’t mimic his unique style, I did write an offbeat ode to him and a few others the best way I knew how.

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Date: 7/14/2023 6:35:00 PM
Hi Courtney, slowly, tho self deprecating at first, (certainly not accurate!) and I might add, every poet brings a unique moment to literature no other poet, famous or not can extend from my view...your last three quatrains, especially the final verse, captures magical, timeless beauty, reflective of the author, for my thoughts to float away on the skill of your pen, Courtney
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Date: 6/7/2023 8:53:00 AM
Thanks for your reply Courtney, I am in the South West of Scotlad about 6 miles west of Glasgow near the airport in Renfrewshire. Trust life is good with you, kindest regards, Gordon
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Date: 6/7/2023 8:15:00 AM
This is a lovely pen Courtney, with such nice rhyme and imagery too. Hope you're doing well, its beautiful sunshine over here in Scotland. Blessings, Gordon
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Courtney Hubbert
Date: 6/7/2023 8:27:00 AM
Thank you so much for the lovely words. Scotland is a place I have always wanted to visit. Which part are in you?

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