And Along I Come and Sit Beside You

I sit in the darkness 
until it’s time to play 


not looking for trouble 
but it makes it’s way 


I lay the threads 
they crisscross 
and crosshatch 
they go this way and that 


I lay the threads 
so sticky 
I made them 
I think they are quite nice 


I lay the threads 
that draw you to me 
at first 
you find just one 
then two 
and then three 
when you find more 
you realize you can't move 
you're really quite stuck 
trapped you see 
but go ahead and struggle 
they'll just bind you further 
and alert you to me 


I’ll come see you 
and touch you 
then taste you 
but first we must play 


I spin you and spin you 
to make sure you’re held tight 
then tap you to see if you’re ripe 


I tell you all would have been fine 
but you had to come find me 
to see me 
to see what I do 
you see 
you forced me 
to do what I do 
now I do it to you. 


I feel you 
then smell you 
before I bite 
and when I do it 
it gives you a fright 
but not long after you think it feels right 


you no longer struggle 
because you feel good 
as I lick you 
and suck you 
I admit I enjoy it 
except how it turns out 


sweet bliss in your eyes 
we've shared our last moment 
then you’ll leave me forever 
the only thing left 
is your taste in my mouth
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Davis Avatar
January 17, 2014 at 9:15 PM
Eelun Welcome to the soup. This was a very enjoyable piece of writing. The descriptions and imagery used allows the reader to be a part of this tale you are telling. Nicely done. Thanks for the great comment on my Calm Down poem.
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January 15, 2014 at 8:23 PM
Wow, amazing poem Eelun. Deeply expressed with great vision, and imagery. Great choice of poetic flair in your words. Enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.
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January 14, 2014 at 8:28 AM
Hi Eelun, well expressed.... , I like your first poetic piece on the site, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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January 14, 2014 at 7:57 PM
I really appreciate it Linda. I'm glad you liked my poem. I can't wait to check out yours. This seems like a great family to be a part of and look forward to what the future here holds. Take care as well, your new poet friend Eelun.
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January 14, 2014 at 5:16 AM
wow, the best poem i've read this morning. gripping from start to end. love the bite. Eelun,  , Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Skat
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January 14, 2014 at 7:52 PM
Thank you very much Skat. I'm really jazzed you liked it. I look forward to checking out and commenting on yours. Thanks for the warm greetings. I've only been writing poetry for about half a year and love it. I'm an artist and have been looking for a new outlet, poetry is it. Thanks again, Your friend Eelun.
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January 14, 2014 at 4:39 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup, Eelun- I choose your first great poem and hope you will write many more in the future - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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January 14, 2014 at 7:44 PM
Thanks for the warm welcome Anne. I look forward to being part of the soup family. I'm kind of new to poetry and have already realized that poets are a breed of their own, one that I am proud to be part of. xoxo Eelun.
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