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and a way hers goes

. Out the front door the back's to the creek

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Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 2/29/2024 4:16:00 AM

Hello Jim, Your poem seems to be a simple observation about the layout or orientation of a location, indicating that the front of a building faces away from a creek or body of water located behind it. It seems to imply a focus on what is in front rather than what lies behind. I like when it keeps me guessing. - Blessings, Daniel

James Peranteau
Date: 2/29/2024 4:54:00 PM

lol...okay...i likes the guessing part...i look behind me a lot sir, everything i see, fond iz the werd, yep, i'm sure uv it...anything in front uv me, i ponder uv the soon to be remembers...thanx, james