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Ancient Sport of Egypt

There was a bated hush over the arena people watched the warriors fight the lion it was a battle royal, much needed was stamina they could not complete their task without it Fearful of his power and strength they fought mightily to overcome him knowing if he got loose he would attack ripping them from limb to bloody limb The crowd gasped in hot excitement secretly they wanted the lion to break free they were there for blood, the more the better just so long as it was not their own The fight carried on some men mauled as the lion tugged them close bleeding they were carried off more warriors took their place Cheers go up as the mighty lion is overpowered legs bound up he roars in frustration the warriors stand round jeering one grasps his spear and strikes deep The lion gives a final defiant roar as he lies blood pouring out he starts to shake with shock as his heart pumps to a stop The smell of battle sweat and blood hang heavily in the air intoxicating the cheers fade to a silent respect the honor that is paid to a worthy foe written 12/01/2013 contest Ancient Egypt

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Date: 12/26/2013 7:57:00 PM
Nice take on the interpretation and congratulations on the win, Shadow
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Date: 12/27/2013 4:56:00 AM
hi Ram appreciated ty so much Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/26/2013 5:43:00 PM
Grreat write and win Shadow ..congrats
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Date: 12/27/2013 4:55:00 AM
Joseph ty Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 12/27/2013 4:54:00 AM
Date: 12/4/2013 2:39:00 PM
powerful and sad one here, my friend - a big winner for sure
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Date: 12/6/2013 7:25:00 PM
hi Jack nice of you to visit ty so much Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/3/2013 6:49:00 PM
I see you continue to be inspired. Very effective piece. Seems kinda unfair for the lion, I might have let him out to give him a fighting chance.
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Date: 12/6/2013 7:24:00 PM
nice thought Rick not what picture shows though I am glad I am not on the end of the ropes two seem very inadequate ty dear Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/3/2013 5:39:00 PM
GREAT description of the sad event. well, for me it is sad. I am sure for the crowd , it was quite joyous.
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Date: 12/6/2013 7:20:00 PM
yes it is Andrea and for what? So called sport!!! They were blood thirsty days ty for reading Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/2/2013 5:48:00 PM
sad ending for the lion...very nicely penned Shadow
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Date: 12/3/2013 4:24:00 PM
yes Joseph barbaric even ty Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/2/2013 2:53:00 PM
Really great imagery and storytelling in this poem. This kept my interest all the way through! Very well done, Shadow! I wish you the best of luck in the contest!...Thank you so much for the wonderful congrats on my poem. It really means a lot!
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Date: 12/3/2013 4:21:00 PM
hi Kelly and ty for your nice review and gl wishes Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/1/2013 9:54:00 PM
Great thoughts nicely penned on the picture
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Date: 12/3/2013 4:20:00 PM
ty Ram expressive painting Shadow x smile hug
Date: 12/1/2013 8:31:00 PM
Great write Shadow!!!! This could be ancient or now it seems.
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Date: 12/3/2013 4:19:00 PM
ty Arthur yes it could be. Shadow x smile hug

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