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Ancient Shadows Awaken into God’s Light

Underneath the deep seabed the stirring sands of time have passed on.
Ancient shadows continue to haunt all of us from the oceans’ depths,
And insidious and violent nightmares portray bloody and evil visions,
As an old treasure chest is opened and a gull’s cry foretells tragic stories.

Untold riches awaken Neptune’s deepest waves as the tides turn inward,
And a star-gazing dust trail turns into a golden circle of subtle measure.
The dark moon’s horrid howl sounds in its crimson cradle over the ocean 
As the cruelest beast from evil Hellspawn creeps and invades all energies.

The moon’s beam feasts on poor and lonely souls under the cover of night,
Whilst savagely touching the sad forlorn places between Heaven and Earth.
These unholy places of dark origin beckon the spirit of a vile Vampire who 
Cometh from a deep-darkness creeping around under the Devil’s own aura.

This Prince of Darkness bringeth enchanting soft-sweet kisses of solitude,
Tempting now the innocent silhouette of a ravishingly beautiful young lady
Whose true desire and passion for love leaps over an ice-ruby magical fire,
As her robust heartbeats incite the Vampire’s ravenous thirst for her blood.

The sensual fire stoked by this lady’s heartbeats and lifeblood burn sold 
Down a macabre river of true darkness, all perfect up, as she gasps aloud
For air, wincing and moaning audibly, as she expires with a most ghastly
Death rattle as the Prince of Darkness gleefully smiles at her godless soul.

This gruesome image invokes a blending of human bread eating into the
Suffering eyes of salted fish bait trapped and gasping for air, for mercy,
Just like a trapped drunken sailor now swallowed inside hungry ghouls
Who haunt over dark sea whispers that chill to the bone mankind’s future.

Those souls lost within the land of this living dream bask now positive as
The darkness turns into sunlight in God’s own yard of supreme radiance, 
Metamorphosing into a lovely butterfly emerging from its silken cocoon,
Now so cotton-soft and swallowed by the bright light of the human soul.

The soul’s lucent energy of heavenly radiance comes forth for all to see
As the Devil’s dark beast now sings its paeans of utter joy as this terror
Transforms itself—yet ever so slowly—into a calm sea of true change.
With this miracle change cometh a peace sanctuary of God’s angels!

That’s a thousand of God’s angels now chanting with a pleasured delight
As a heaven-sought change comes to nurture the plight of all lost souls.
With this aura of change, love’s sacred light shineth now so ultra-bright,
For even the darkened heart of the beast can find peace in Heaven’s light!

We await to see where this beast shall go and what shall follow in kind.
Shall this former beast of the Devil himself experience a final epiphany
To be like the blessed butterfly or to return to the black heart of the crow?
Almighty God does indeed move in the most mysterious of ways! 

The Prince of Darkness laughs no longer as his long-lost soul burns hot
And blue-bile-black-red in Hell’s own deepest, darkest inescapable pit!
No redemption for him and for his master, the Devil, confined below.
By God’s holy command, all ancient shadows shall awaken whole into
Heaven’s eternal and radiant light! All by God’s divine grace and mercy!

Amen! Amen! Amen!

Anne-Lise Andresen, Gary Bateman, Liam McDaid, and Michael Clarke
A Team Collaborated Poem, Copyright © All Rights Reserved
November 16, 2016 (Narrative)

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/28/2017 3:38:00 PM
Great write, lian, wonderful that a group can come together with inspiration. ~*
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Date: 4/28/2017 2:15:00 PM
Absolutely fabulous my friend, Liam!Masterfully written! A 7!
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Date: 4/26/2017 9:16:00 AM
Liam Mate!! Same . . . Same as before. This one is a masterful effort for sure, but I guess that I'm slightly biased for understandable reasons. Glad to see you got it posted on your end so everyone in the Soup has a chance to read it again!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Date: 4/26/2017 9:18:00 AM
Liam -- I sent a mail to Anne-Lise about more co-writes in the future. (I'll be in touch as well!!) Cheers, Gary
Date: 4/24/2017 3:42:00 AM
I can't add to Dorian's comment, this is so impressive. Congratulations to all of you.#7+++
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Date: 4/23/2017 10:13:00 PM
Hi Liam, Gary, Anne-Lise n' Mike!This is an outstanding n' very profound Narrative poem, you've painted here my dearest friends.Amazing piece! Very dark, n' kind of scary tale, but beautifully written, with a positive ending. Great imagery! Excellent collaborations! Just awesome!Your pens are mighty golden!A 7 ++++ to each!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam. So very beautiful romantic gentle and sweet. I really hope n' pray a lot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive. Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers. Keep your faith! Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week ! In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs! xoxox D.^O^
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