Get Your Premium Membership

Ancient Salamander

An ancient salamander swam the ocean deep, scarlet toes, upon his feet. Frilly gills were, floating free; down into the brine’s darkest keep. Stiff finned ridges upon his back helped him keep away attacks. Undulated through the waters black, he was the last one living of his pack. Salamander’s getting old; ancient amphibian with face half black. Mining crustaceans for his meal, though his stamina is slack. Caecillian knows one day, he will die, but, for now, he’ll swim back, to the land, to his nest, with tail, obliterating his paw tracks.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 11/15/2019 1:36:00 PM
This salamander will no doubt follow the pattern of ancestors. Nicely done.
Login to Reply
Kiser Avatar
M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/17/2019 1:01:00 PM
He is on my Mom's family crest. He's very old!
Date: 11/13/2019 6:22:00 PM
Thanks for an entertaining education about salamanders via a delightful poem! Great! Blessings, Gershon
Login to Reply
Kiser Avatar
M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/14/2019 2:37:00 PM
Thanks again.
Date: 11/13/2019 8:39:00 AM
Nice image of one of our fellow creatures! Peace & Love Matthew Anish
Login to Reply
Kiser Avatar
M. L. Kiser
Date: 11/13/2019 1:48:00 PM
Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things