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Ancient Guardians

Primordial wood Sheltering the cells of life That shall sustain us *Inspired by Raul Moreno's contest, "Solace in Nature".

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Date: 12/3/2009 8:44:00 AM
Very nice flow here, I enjoyed the write...Well done. RdP
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Date: 10/11/2009 4:03:00 PM
Absolutely beautiful ! Donna. Love, Lainie
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Date: 10/9/2009 8:45:00 PM
Evocative view of nature! I think that "White Bird" is allegorical although I think I did that without intent. As I am sure you know when you write things come out that you did not expect to put there in your initial thoughts. Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
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Date: 10/8/2009 4:21:00 PM
Nicely done Haiku. Good luck in the contest. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 9/25/2009 1:21:00 PM
clever short but exxtremely powerful, congrats
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Date: 9/19/2009 12:38:00 PM
Thanks for the support of my contest Donna...Raul
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Date: 9/16/2009 4:31:00 PM
yes..primordial nice word! Light & Love
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Date: 9/14/2009 2:53:00 PM
Clever Haiku Donna, another winner in my eyes>>good luck in the contest>>James
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Date: 9/14/2009 4:53:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your heartfelt poetry today Donna. Thank you for sharing. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/13/2009 1:23:00 PM
Awesome write here, Donna and a definite winner for Raul's contest!! Good Luck!
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Date: 9/13/2009 10:35:00 AM
Interesting perspective. The title is fitting for the poem. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for taking time to comment on my poem. Karen
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Date: 9/13/2009 5:49:00 AM
Very interesting perspective on the protection offered by trees that live for hundreds of years. Where would we be without the oxygen they produce and the habitat they provide for all God's creatures? Good luck in the contest, Donna! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 9/13/2009 2:10:00 AM
Hi Donna Very thought provoking and well written. Good luck in Raul's contest. Love Light Truth Patricia
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Date: 9/13/2009 12:33:00 AM
Best wishes with this one Donna.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments.
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