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   Emile Pinet's Seven Ten Contest   ~   August 21, 2023

Ancient Elm, Regally Frocked

Rooted on a moss-banked hill, its branches spread far and wide. By Summer's end, leaves veined gold and crimson. Then, Autumn’s hand brushed them with russet paint. Twas the time of year the elm tree despised. Wind ruffled in their last days, leaves danced as if burning flames, until gales sent them tumbling to the ground. Barren, as though in malaise, the elm stood. Blame was cast upon harsh Winter weather. Weeping for its naked limbs, on a moss-banked hill it grieved. For the change of season, it held loathing and contempt for Nature's wrongful doing. For surrounding its roots with drifts of snow But on cusp of Spring's advent tiny buddings will appear. Branches will be clothed in fulgent raiment, an umbrella agape, providing shade for trilling songbirds in need of perching. Reigning from atop the hill, Ancient elm, regally frocked.
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Kendrick Avatar
October 2, 2023 at 6:11 AM
Congrats. SK
Allison Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 8:12 AM
gee Lin i can't believed I missed this seasonal beauty, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Lane Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 8:22 AM
Well, I'll forgive you since you've found it now. HAha.. just teasing. I congratulate you on your win in Emile's contest, too, Jan.
Fowler Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 7:59 AM
So beautiful with its glowing imagery Lin. Marvelous! Congratulations! :)
Lane Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 8:21 AM
Thanks ever so much, Linda.
Kitchin Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 5:19 AM
Lin, congratulations on your top placement win with your beautifully penned poem, hugs.
Lane Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 8:21 AM
Thanks a whole lot, Tania. I'm always grateful for you kind comments.
Pinet Avatar
September 30, 2023 at 1:27 PM
Congratulations Lin! Your poem has placed "Second" in my PoetrySoup contest. Beautifully written, my friend, Emile.
Lane Avatar
October 1, 2023 at 8:20 AM
Thank you for honoring my verse with a placement in your contest, Emile. Your choice of themes is always something I look forward to creating.
Beaufort Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 1:07 PM
I am very impressed by the range of styles and subject matter you put forward. It's a pleasure to read and brings a smile to my face. Thanks for that!!
Lane Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 1:18 PM
Thank YOU, Duke for such lovely and encouraging comments.
Buhagiar Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 1:44 AM
Lovely rip throughout the season. Great vocabulary use. Great imagery.
Lane Avatar
August 22, 2023 at 3:23 AM
Thank you, Victor. I value your time and kind comments.
Goldsmith Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 1:07 PM
I enjoyed your lovely write/story/picture. Have a great day.............
Lane Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 4:32 PM
Thanks for both remarks, Paula.
Cunningham Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 12:20 PM
A tree for all seasons Lin, stunning imagery in your well composed verse. If it's for a contest, good luck. Tom
Lane Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 4:31 PM
Thank you, Tom, for your confidence in me. It’s for Emile’s contest.
Lindley Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 10:52 AM
You my friend always gift such superbly crafted poetry! I could see that monarch reigning over all. Nature has always intrigued me. You descriptive language was so pleasing to read and ponder. A gem and a fav too.
Lane Avatar
August 21, 2023 at 4:30 PM
You know I value your opinion, Robert and to read your gracious comments was supportive and appreciated. Thank you!
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