Ancestral Aroma

ANCESTRAL AROMA


    Touching my birthplace, river Holy Ganges flowing in delight.
    After sunset, me standing on stream strand watching tranquil twilight.
    Before fading, depressed diffused rays infusing vermilion on pellucid sky.
    Parrots perched on nests: Framing flowery garland eager egrets flying by..
    Intermittent tone of mockingbirds in cadence makes me alert.
    Dusk darkens, startling calls of menagerie of jackals suddenly start.
    Rhythmic splashing of little brittle restless ripples in continued monotony.
    Overwhelmed, enchanted sensing inherited consciousness in harmony.
    Frangipani spreading luscious fragrance recalling soul to search past trail.
   Gentle zephyr in amazing ambient spreading ancestral aroma to inhale.

  01/08/18

 Edited on 04/11/20
                                    First Place

 'STRAND PICK 8'  Contest by Brian Strand
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 1/17/2018 10:46:00 PM
Great job arrange the 10 words, congratulations on your win, Anisha. Hugs Eve ~`*
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Date: 1/13/2018 2:24:00 AM
Beautiful images Anisha.
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Date: 1/12/2018 8:13:00 PM
Lush imagery beautifully expressed Anisha. Congratulations on your lovely win with your enchanting poem. ~Susan
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Date: 1/11/2018 7:48:00 PM
Beautiful imagery Anisha in your lovely poem!!! Congratulations on your win! ~Judy
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Date: 1/11/2018 6:27:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Anisha. Well done.
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Date: 1/11/2018 5:38:00 PM
Congratulations Anisha :)
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Date: 1/11/2018 4:43:00 PM
Hi Anisha, That sounds amazing . Congratulations on your winning write:-) Alexis
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Date: 1/11/2018 2:53:00 PM
Sounds lovely Anisha.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Date: 1/9/2018 12:41:00 PM
A beautiful write, good luck in the contest! Love, Juli-Michelle
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Date: 1/9/2018 11:14:00 PM
Thanks Julie. Love
Date: 1/8/2018 7:13:00 AM
Beautifully written Anisha...best wishes
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