Anatomy of Love

Eros has rattled my bones
waxing your spirit
through snakeskin
I travelled rotating moons
entering state of beloved
Sharing enticed journey
through eyelids closed
Venusian fossiles lived
between the space
of a heartbeat
Loins of Lotus opened
in waning silence
Perhaps, never
will we breathe
deeper than this
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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May 5, 2017 at 1:41 PM
I loved the poem and those last three lines really captured the essence of this poem for me. Really nicely done.
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May 6, 2017 at 3:07 AM
Hi Chris, Thank you for your kind words, the last lines seemed to bring the words to a closure indeed, glad you enjoyed
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