Gershon Wolf Poet Rhyme

Anatomy of a Date

       First date
         went great
       'Til G.O.A.T.
         ate plate

       Second time
         was fine
       Then she
         broke spine

       Third time
         paid bill
          to her
        Hos-pi-tal

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Jerry Brotherton December 15, 2023 at 2:21 PM You know what they say, horrible first dates end up as the best relationships. Things can't get any worse, so the pressure is off. Gershon Wolf December 17, 2023 at 12:35 PM Hadn't thought of it that way, Jerry. Very interesting. All I can see is that one of my sons has a lousy first date -- and there's never a second date. Oh, well. Try figs, I guess. lol.

Quoth Theraven December 14, 2023 at 6:54 PM Gershon, Enjoying this Anatomy class immensely. -Richard