Analytical Green

Analytical Green
Is Putrid 
Spent to fast 
Gained too slow
Maybe it's Olive
Or seafoam green
No matter the color 
It is our uprising
Into a vast dominion
Of analytical green
Pea green
Just like vomit
The things that make 
Us puke
The things we gain
To lose 
Emerald like the 
Eyes on the back
Of a dollar bill

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 1/12/2011 5:50:00 PM
Quite profound, Shane. I like the way you used various shades of green to express things. LUv, andrea
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