William Kelii Kekaula Poet Acrostic

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Alto woos morning dews~~faint brushes diffuse sprung quivers
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Alights a dove in feathered whites~~ruffled delights to full measures
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At last reserves at rest~~coos tuneful blessed delivers
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2020 November 11
*1st Place*
Kim’s Acrostic Play Contest
Sijo
~~Kim Rodrigues

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Reason A. Poteet November 28, 2020 at 10:25 AM I like the use of alto, being an alto myself, the lower voice of the morning dove. Cheers! William, great acrostical. William Kelii Kekaula November 28, 2020 at 3:32 PM Hearty gratefulness, Reason, for your wondrous considerations my friend, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman November 25, 2020 at 8:06 AM Congratulations William on your first place win! We have mourning doves in our yard. I love waking up to their "coos." This is as lovely and delicate as their morning song. Aloha my friend. William Kelii Kekaula November 25, 2020 at 12:37 PM Thanks a whole lot, Sam, doves in Hawaii aren't wholly white as they have a slight tinge to them, mayhaps the Hawaiian sun, and congrats as well to your rhyming win, Aloha!

Alexis Y. November 25, 2020 at 7:05 AM Hi William, Congratulations on your top win. Have a great day:-) Alexis William Kelii Kekaula November 25, 2020 at 12:39 PM Many thanks, Alexis, and congrats as well to your rhyming win, Aloha!

Anisha Dutta November 25, 2020 at 6:50 AM BIG CONGRATS to win TOP on your marvelous poem. Blessing William Kelii Kekaula November 25, 2020 at 12:41 PM Thank you kindly, Anisha, for your continued blessings, Aloha!

Kim Rodrigues November 25, 2020 at 6:44 AM Love especially that second line! Congrats on first place, William! William Kelii Kekaula November 25, 2020 at 12:43 PM Thank you so much, Kim, for your enjoyable acrostic twist, such a wonderful idea, and welcomed opportunity, as well as, my grateful thanks for the awesome placement, Aloha!

Linda Alice Fowler November 12, 2020 at 6:19 AM Beautifully written William. All best for the contest! Linda William Kelii Kekaula November 12, 2020 at 10:29 AM I had fun with this, Linda, thanks for the encouragement, Aloha!

Anne-Lise Andresen November 11, 2020 at 6:22 AM - Really well done, best wishes in the contest William :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) - (a fun contest) William Kelii Kekaula November 11, 2020 at 10:34 AM Truly 'twas creatively enjoyable, Anne-Lise, thanks for the encouragement, Aloha!