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Anagram Sijo Alto woos morning dews~~faint brushes diffuse sprung quivers N Alights a dove in feathered whites~~ruffled delights to full measures G R At last reserves at rest~~coos tuneful blessed delivers M 2020 November 11 *1st Place* Kim’s Acrostic Play Contest Sijo ~~Kim Rodrigues

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Reason A. Poteet

Date: 11/28/2020 10:25:00 AM

I like the use of alto, being an alto myself, the lower voice of the morning dove. Cheers! William, great acrostical.

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/28/2020 3:32:00 PM

Hearty gratefulness, Reason, for your wondrous considerations my friend, Aloha!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 11/25/2020 8:06:00 AM

Congratulations William on your first place win! We have mourning doves in our yard. I love waking up to their "coos." This is as lovely and delicate as their morning song. Aloha my friend.

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/25/2020 12:37:00 PM

Thanks a whole lot, Sam, doves in Hawaii aren't wholly white as they have a slight tinge to them, mayhaps the Hawaiian sun, and congrats as well to your rhyming win, Aloha!

Alexis Y.

Date: 11/25/2020 7:05:00 AM

Hi William, Congratulations on your top win. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/25/2020 12:39:00 PM

Many thanks, Alexis, and congrats as well to your rhyming win, Aloha!

Anisha Dutta

Date: 11/25/2020 6:50:00 AM

BIG CONGRATS to win TOP on your marvelous poem. Blessing

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/25/2020 12:41:00 PM

Thank you kindly, Anisha, for your continued blessings, Aloha!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 11/25/2020 6:44:00 AM

Love especially that second line! Congrats on first place, William!

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/25/2020 12:43:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kim, for your enjoyable acrostic twist, such a wonderful idea, and welcomed opportunity, as well as, my grateful thanks for the awesome placement, Aloha!

Linda Alice Fowler

Date: 11/12/2020 6:19:00 AM

Beautifully written William. All best for the contest! Linda

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/12/2020 10:29:00 AM

I had fun with this, Linda, thanks for the encouragement, Aloha!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/11/2020 6:22:00 AM

- Really well done, best wishes in the contest William :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) - (a fun contest)

Hilo Poet
Date: 11/11/2020 10:34:00 AM

Truly 'twas creatively enjoyable, Anne-Lise, thanks for the encouragement, Aloha!