'ana 'Uhibbouk

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Smile your love across my life
Hold my face inside your thoughts
Talk with fingers on my spine
Whisper your lips over my longing

Fold your warmth around my ice
And speak with words so soundless

          "'ana 'uhibbouk
          Je t'aime
          Ich liebe dich
          I love you"

I spell your sibilants breathlessly
Until you arch me to a crescent
Screaming your name in silence
Under your fingers I come alive

Your name, love, your passion
Imploding explosively

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 3/2/2017 8:13:00 PM
A powerful poem of passion and love. I love how your words come alive <3 Even though had to look up a few, sibilants and 'ana 'uhibbouk, it is fun to learn new words! :)
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Darren White
Date: 3/2/2017 11:44:00 PM
Sibilants is a great word, isn't it? 'ana 'uhibbouk meand I Love You. It's arabic, my native language.
Date: 3/2/2017 12:01:00 PM
Such a beautiful and emotional poem ... Well penned, Darren.
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Darren White
Date: 3/2/2017 11:42:00 PM
Thank you Adeniji!
Date: 3/2/2017 10:04:00 AM
In Maltese it would be'Jiena Nhobbok':)..Similar..We have romantic and semetic language structure build up.Such an amazing poem..How beautiful this is..A seven.
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Darren White
Date: 3/2/2017 10:06:00 AM
Yes, it's quite related, the language, I like that :)
Date: 3/2/2017 10:04:00 AM
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Date: 3/2/2017 9:49:00 AM
Such a beautiful love poem my friend. but I have to ask, no matter how dumb it makes me look, the first "italicized line", what language is that?
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Darren White
Date: 3/2/2017 9:55:00 AM
That is not dumb at all, there are no dumb questions :) It is Arabic, my native language, and it simply means I Love You.
Date: 3/2/2017 4:31:00 AM
Well now. And yes, wow. Explosive, passionate, alive and so much more come to mind. The emotive factor is ever present. Oh the red of it all. Well done on all counts.
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Darren White
Date: 3/2/2017 4:53:00 AM
Thank you, Lisa :) Sometimes I love to write something sensual, I believe I've succeeded.
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