An Unknown Death

an unknown death

cracked leaves sigh and decay

bones infused in bark

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 2/3/2011 8:19:00 AM
Great poem Sasha!
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Date: 1/31/2011 12:49:00 PM
This is absolutely amazing!
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Date: 1/29/2011 11:38:00 AM
Thanks for the feedback everyone :)
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Date: 1/29/2011 11:34:00 AM
I love it!
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Date: 1/29/2011 10:28:00 AM
This is easily one of the best Haikus I have ever read. Great job!
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Date: 1/27/2011 8:25:00 PM
Amazing haiku! My eyes welled up with tears.
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Date: 1/27/2011 2:55:00 PM
Thanks so much guys!
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Date: 1/27/2011 9:32:00 AM
Really Awesome !!! Christine
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Date: 1/26/2011 8:05:00 PM
Yes, this is exactly what an 'unknown death' would be like. You have captured this very well. Congratulations on your very well deserved place among the winners of this contest. Excellent writing. Best wishes. Deb
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Date: 1/25/2011 8:33:00 AM
^^ Thanks!
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Date: 1/25/2011 4:22:00 AM
Congratulations Sasha for the win in Charles Henderson's contest "haiku vs senyru". Love, Carol
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Date: 1/24/2011 10:28:00 PM
wow, what imagery. Congratulations, Sasha!
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Date: 1/24/2011 7:35:00 PM
Thank you! :D
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Date: 1/24/2011 5:28:00 PM
love this one, congrats on your win in the contest
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Date: 1/24/2011 11:45:00 AM
Aww thanks so much you guys... you're really encouraging me to keep writing! :D xo <3
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Date: 1/24/2011 11:45:00 AM
Aww thanks so much you guys... you're really encouraging me to keep writing! :D xo <3
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Date: 1/24/2011 10:32:00 AM
sullen but incredibly beautiful, sasha.. THUMBS UP for the big win..:) huggs, nette
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Date: 1/24/2011 9:54:00 AM
Way to0 go Sasha, worthy poem presentation for 7th place. Agape, Moses
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Date: 1/24/2011 9:21:00 AM
Your poem is so creative and thought-provoking, Sasha. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 1/24/2011 8:58:00 AM
Hi Sasha - Congratulations on your WIN in the contest. Best wishes, KC
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Date: 1/24/2011 8:39:00 AM
Thank you so much everyone! :D Your love and support is greatly appreciated! <3
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Date: 1/24/2011 6:46:00 AM
Congrats Sasha on your super win in the haiku vs. senryu contest.. awesome win luv..
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Date: 1/24/2011 3:55:00 AM
I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sasha. Please continue to write you will do very well. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/23/2011 4:01:00 PM
Wonderful write withg nice images on the unknown death- Sasha
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Date: 1/23/2011 3:57:00 PM
Very descriptive work..I can see the scene..Sara
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