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An Unknown Death

an unknown death cracked leaves sigh and decay bones infused in bark

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Tom Smith

Date: 2/3/2011 8:19:00 AM

Great poem Sasha!

Cassandra Sutherland

Date: 1/31/2011 12:49:00 PM

This is absolutely amazing!

Sasha Edl

Date: 1/29/2011 11:38:00 AM

Thanks for the feedback everyone :)

Alexandra Wells

Date: 1/29/2011 11:34:00 AM

I love it!

Dakoda Woods

Date: 1/29/2011 10:28:00 AM

This is easily one of the best Haikus I have ever read. Great job!

Heather Miles

Date: 1/27/2011 8:25:00 PM

Amazing haiku! My eyes welled up with tears.

Sasha Edl

Date: 1/27/2011 2:55:00 PM

Thanks so much guys!

Christine A Kysely

Date: 1/27/2011 9:32:00 AM

Really Awesome !!! Christine

Deb Radke

Date: 1/26/2011 8:05:00 PM

Yes, this is exactly what an 'unknown death' would be like. You have captured this very well. Congratulations on your very well deserved place among the winners of this contest. Excellent writing. Best wishes. Deb

Sasha Edl

Date: 1/25/2011 8:33:00 AM

^^ Thanks!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/25/2011 4:22:00 AM

Congratulations Sasha for the win in Charles Henderson's contest "haiku vs senyru". Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/24/2011 10:28:00 PM

wow, what imagery. Congratulations, Sasha!

Sasha Edl

Date: 1/24/2011 7:35:00 PM

Thank you! :D

Francine Roberts

Date: 1/24/2011 5:28:00 PM

love this one, congrats on your win in the contest

Sasha Edl

Date: 1/24/2011 11:45:00 AM

Aww thanks so much you guys... you're really encouraging me to keep writing! :D xo <3

Sasha Edl

Date: 1/24/2011 11:45:00 AM

Aww thanks so much you guys... you're really encouraging me to keep writing! :D xo <3

Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/24/2011 10:32:00 AM

sullen but incredibly beautiful, sasha.. THUMBS UP for the big win..:) huggs, nette

John Freeman

Date: 1/24/2011 9:54:00 AM

Way to0 go Sasha, worthy poem presentation for 7th place. Agape, Moses

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 1/24/2011 9:21:00 AM

Your poem is so creative and thought-provoking, Sasha. Congratulations on your win in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Kory Calhoun

Date: 1/24/2011 8:58:00 AM

Hi Sasha - Congratulations on your WIN in the contest. Best wishes, KC

Sasha Edl

Date: 1/24/2011 8:39:00 AM

Thank you so much everyone! :D Your love and support is greatly appreciated! <3

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/24/2011 6:46:00 AM

Congrats Sasha on your super win in the haiku vs. senryu contest.. awesome win luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 1/24/2011 3:55:00 AM

I would like to welcome you to PoetrySoup Sasha. Please continue to write you will do very well. Wishing you the best in your writing endeavors this year. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 1/23/2011 4:01:00 PM

Wonderful write withg nice images on the unknown death- Sasha

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/23/2011 3:57:00 PM

Very descriptive work..I can see the scene..Sara