An Unimpeded View

Foreign, Black, Rainbows, and White.
Separated, a nations delusional right?
Trust in that, reality it's a grey matter.
For these barriers only open minds will shatter. 

M. Lyn Church 
July 7, 2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Kendrick Avatar
May 21, 2016 at 8:43 AM
Your poem was awesome, creative and unique..Thank you for entering my Preterition Contest..I am sorry for being so long in congratulating you but things have been happening here that I could not control..Congratulations on your placement..Sara
Kimathi Avatar
May 18, 2016 at 4:33 AM
I love your metaphorical verse.... Congrats Lyn, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)
Smith Avatar
March 25, 2016 at 8:37 PM
Some changes are too slow, point made well Lyn, thanks for sharing, Charlie
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