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An Unfriendly Neighbor

i ran a c r o s s a neighbor's flat just to borrow some sugar, in return, i got served too much salt; ouch, not the flavor i was expecting! i guess he's not the salt of the earth? Acquaintance And Neighborhood Poetry Contest Sponsored by Sotto Poet Date written: 02/19/2023 *not a true write*

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Date: 2/20/2023 11:42:00 AM
Heartfelt congratulations on your contest win with this incredible poem, Edward. With my best wishes to you.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/20/2023 7:03:00 PM
Thank you very much indeed for the wonderful feedback, the congrats and my 1st placement, Lasaad:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 2/19/2023 6:23:00 PM
I was expecting an ant, but salt? Had to order out I guess. Gag me! B0L in the contest, Edward!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/19/2023 8:01:00 PM
Thank you so much, Anaya:-)
Date: 2/19/2023 5:51:00 PM
Definitely a 'hint' not to borrow again. Very humorous Edward, and well written. Good luck in the contest.
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/19/2023 8:01:00 PM
Thank you very much, Wendy:-)

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