An Unexpected Visitor - Part 2

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~Another Fairyland Story - An Unexpected Visitor- Part 2
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It was something that looked quite  fragile and very small.But it wasn't an "it" but a very beautiful child Fairy, and she was barely the size of my thumb and let me remind you that I am a very small gnome too, so you get my idea here of how tiny she might have been.When she saw me her very beautiful sky light blue eyes just popped wide opened as she tried to say something to me but for some reason she seemed to be having problem articulating anything, and she looked quite frightened and her beautiful pink shimmering dress was almost in tatters, some pieces jagged and many just missing like she's been in a kind of fight or struggle of some sort or another.She whimpered something but we couldn't understand what she was trying to share with me and the Mouse.I reach out to her from inside his pocket and softly I parted off some of her very long most beautiful blonde hair which was covering most of the startling, and very beautiful blue eyes that I've ever seen in my very long life, because as you may know we gnomes, can live very long lives too just like the fairies, leprechauns, elves, pixies, etc. and all the rest of them Little People who graces us, with their most wonderful presence day and night here in Fairyland, and then so many all over the World. Our very tiny new friend opened her beautiful pink lips as to speak but this time no sound at all came out of them as she then just stopped and closed her tiny eyes again. She just seemed to have fallen fast sleep as tiny, shiny teardrops rolled over her pale pink lovely cheeks.The Mouse just then ever so gently brought her completely out of his pocket and held her in his gentle little hands before handing her to me. So I placed her ever so carefully over my lap as she lay there fast asleep.We then tried our best to get her to drink some of our very delicious magical blend of Mint tea but to not avail as she refused it and getting her quite mad at us for trying to wake her up.So we just decided to let her sleep for a while and try it again at a later hour, and see if she could then talk to us and tell us what happened to her and who or what frightened her and  put her in this very terrible situation and state of mind...



Dorian Petersen Potter
aka ladydp2000
copyright@2016


January.20.2016


~ Author's Notes:

 To be continued in " An Unexpected Visitor" Part 3.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016



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