An Unending Song

what a glorious little poem for fall. LONG time no see Annalise. Congrats on your win. It was long time coming!

Very soothing work..Enjoyed..Congrats on your win..Sara

Congratulations on your win in the "Enchantment of Fall" contest Annalise. Love, Carol

Lovely written Tanka, Audreay! Now leaves are falling and soon they will be fading to welcome winter. Enjoyed the read! All the best!...Love, Gert

Mmmm! Sweet destiny is calling! Love this, Audrey. Joy (Jew)

These drifting leaves that lived above, now drift like aging skeletal lives in gravity fall. To return for tomorrows new bloom. This is simply stunning Audrey >> James ;)

Wow vwry poetic. Poetry at it's best for sure. Love it!

Very lyrical write..I enjoyed reading it ..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I appreciate you taking the time to do that..Sara

Beautiful. I like the sweet destiny part. There is something beautiful about death, the soul going on endlessly. Love, Dave

...and so romantic this time of year...is I is or is I ain't right 'bout this one ! much love, james

short and sweet

Surely, life is an unending song, seasons go and come back, Audrey

Smile ~ "Sweet Anticipation" & "Ow," if "Your Beauty" could only feel inside of my soul then, "You" would surely know, the beautiful breath, so peaceful to breathe; like a soothing autumns breeze; "Breeeathhhe" ~ "Beautifully Lovely Poe; A Fave" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'Dear, Beautiful Audrey Carey;'" Bye!:) ~

Smile ~ "Beautiful, Soft, Peaceful, Gentle, 'Lovely & Priceless, Audrey Carey!!!'" ~ "Yes," life is neverending; from one realm unto the next; one season unto another &, joy in Heaven upon the dawning of that winds song for truly, "Paradise Shall Be Born Forevermore This, 'Beautiful, Destiny!!!'" ~ Smile, I cannot wait my dear for, my heart & soul, already seem to be rejoicing ~ ....Cont:)

Audrey so much beauty in your Tanka. I love your ending ;) love Wilma

Indeed, the song continues from earthly life to choirs of angels in heaven. I like the way you employed leaves as a metaphor, Dimples. Great write! Love, Carolyn

BEAUTIFUL write!!! TAH