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An Unending Song

Crisp winds serenade
Farewell to autumn’s tinged leaves
Sailing, cascading
Sweet destiny is calling      
For life’s, an unending song

~*~

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2012 8:46:00 PM

what a glorious little poem for fall. LONG time no see Annalise. Congrats on your win. It was long time coming!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/7/2012 2:19:00 PM

Very soothing work..Enjoyed..Congrats on your win..Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/7/2012 12:27:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in the "Enchantment of Fall" contest Annalise. Love, Carol

Gert W. Knop

Date: 10/24/2010 8:19:00 AM

Lovely written Tanka, Audreay! Now leaves are falling and soon they will be fading to welcome winter. Enjoyed the read! All the best!...Love, Gert

Joy Wellington

Date: 10/24/2010 3:02:00 AM

Mmmm! Sweet destiny is calling! Love this, Audrey. Joy (Jew)

James Fraser

Date: 10/23/2010 2:22:00 PM

These drifting leaves that lived above, now drift like aging skeletal lives in gravity fall. To return for tomorrows new bloom. This is simply stunning Audrey >> James ;)

Mohammad Taha Effendi

Date: 10/23/2010 6:18:00 AM

Wow vwry poetic. Poetry at it's best for sure. Love it!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/22/2010 3:46:00 PM

Very lyrical write..I enjoyed reading it ..I am glad that I chose this one to read this eve..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..I appreciate you taking the time to do that..Sara

Daver Austin

Date: 10/20/2010 3:35:00 PM

Beautiful. I like the sweet destiny part. There is something beautiful about death, the soul going on endlessly. Love, Dave

James Peranteau

Date: 10/20/2010 2:45:00 PM

...and so romantic this time of year...is I is or is I ain't right 'bout this one ! much love, james

Anthony Beesley

Date: 10/20/2010 2:02:00 PM

short and sweet

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 10/20/2010 12:03:00 PM

Surely, life is an unending song, seasons go and come back, Audrey

John Rhinem

Date: 10/20/2010 11:17:00 AM

Smile ~ "Sweet Anticipation" & "Ow," if "Your Beauty" could only feel inside of my soul then, "You" would surely know, the beautiful breath, so peaceful to breathe; like a soothing autumns breeze; "Breeeathhhe" ~ "Beautifully Lovely Poe; A Fave" ~ "My Love & Warmth to 'You Always' &, All You Love," John! ~ Smile, "Have A Very 'Blessed & Beautiful' Day 'Dear, Beautiful Audrey Carey;'" Bye!:) ~

John Rhinem

Date: 10/20/2010 11:09:00 AM

Smile ~ "Beautiful, Soft, Peaceful, Gentle, 'Lovely & Priceless, Audrey Carey!!!'" ~ "Yes," life is neverending; from one realm unto the next; one season unto another &, joy in Heaven upon the dawning of that winds song for truly, "Paradise Shall Be Born Forevermore This, 'Beautiful, Destiny!!!'" ~ Smile, I cannot wait my dear for, my heart & soul, already seem to be rejoicing ~ ....Cont:)

Wilma Neels

Date: 10/20/2010 10:24:00 AM

Audrey so much beauty in your Tanka. I love your ending ;) love Wilma

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/20/2010 10:16:00 AM

Indeed, the song continues from earthly life to choirs of angels in heaven. I like the way you employed leaves as a metaphor, Dimples. Great write! Love, Carolyn

Tobey Hill

Date: 10/20/2010 10:11:00 AM

BEAUTIFUL write!!! TAH

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