Marvin G. Celestial Poet Haiku

An Undated Creative Realm

Amidst peaceful place 
Beyond words structures exist
Pillars pretty carved.

Euphorically 
Radiating mystery craft
Piece of an old art

One's pay a visit
Strolling across the meadows
Unsure to leave last

A wall serves as frame
Vivid pictures for themselves 
Stunning particles

Parallel doorways
Undated creative realms
Memoirs never last.

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Andrea Dietrich June 25, 2015 at 9:33 PM Congrats for your win! Loved that line about parallel doorways. Marvin G. Celestial July 10, 2015 at 11:08 PM Great thanks!

Edward Ebbs June 25, 2015 at 8:53 PM Good Job, congrats! Marvin G. Celestial July 10, 2015 at 11:08 PM Great thanks Ed!

Richard Lamoureux June 25, 2015 at 8:50 AM I enjoyed, Congratulations. Marvin G. Celestial July 10, 2015 at 11:10 PM Thanks ric!

Skat A June 25, 2015 at 1:27 AM Marvin... Congrats, thank you for the entry. The picture is done right! **SKAT** Marvin G. Celestial July 10, 2015 at 11:10 PM Thanks skat!!!!