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An Owls Weathered Eyes

an owls weathered eyes
                                  chill keeps him still and silent
                                     daybreak warmth awakes

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Poet Destroyer A

January 19, 2012 at 11:03 PM

hi~~~ where are you at... :-(...pd

Poet Destroyer A

November 21, 2011 at 7:08 AM

you got mail... I'm like an owl... daybreak comes and its ... time to hibernate with the warmth of the sun...take care.... pd

Sara Kendrick

November 20, 2011 at 1:18 PM

Enjoyed reading this one..Very descriptive one indeed..If for one of the contest, reads like a winner..I believe that it will be...Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..I am glad that my work brought visual pictures to your mind..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

November 20, 2011 at 12:26 PM

Very lovely haiku, Michael. Really like your description of the owl's "weathered eyes" and the "switch" is very clear in the last line. I'm no haiku expert, but I'd rank this one high in the animal haiku contest. Hope Deb likes it as much as I do! Love and blessings for a great Thanksgiving, Carolyn