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An Owls Weathered Eyes

an owls weathered eyes chill keeps him still and silent daybreak warmth awakes

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 1/19/2012 11:03:00 PM

hi~~~ where are you at... :-(...pd

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/21/2011 7:08:00 AM

you got mail... I'm like an owl... daybreak comes and its ... time to hibernate with the warmth of the sun...take care.... pd

Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/20/2011 1:18:00 PM

Enjoyed reading this one..Very descriptive one indeed..If for one of the contest, reads like a winner..I believe that it will be...Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..I am glad that my work brought visual pictures to your mind..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/20/2011 12:26:00 PM

Very lovely haiku, Michael. Really like your description of the owl's "weathered eyes" and the "switch" is very clear in the last line. I'm no haiku expert, but I'd rank this one high in the animal haiku contest. Hope Deb likes it as much as I do! Love and blessings for a great Thanksgiving, Carolyn

Dinda Minardi

Date: 11/20/2011 9:41:00 AM

daybreak warmth awakes, you described the beauty of the day and brought story of an owl too :)

Cory Long

Date: 11/19/2011 2:14:00 PM

nice job capturing an owls night.. cory