Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

An Overpowering Temptation

I found a new joy that's beyond explanation
A friendship so real, I make this proclamation
One that's so true
A real true blue
Quickly gave into the overpowering temptation


© Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal May 27, 2015 at 7:20 AM Lovely Limerick yet again my friend...: ) New joys are always so inspiring. Always, Laura Jack Ellison May 27, 2015 at 12:13 PM Aww dear sweet Laura, you never fail to brighten my day!!! You are my new joy! Love ya, Jack xxx

Carol Eastman May 26, 2015 at 11:39 AM OOOO...KKKKK... If you don't make a new friend every day... I'd be amazed! Jack Ellison May 27, 2015 at 12:09 PM LOL Now that would be something to shoot for!!! xxxx

Nandita Das May 26, 2015 at 10:59 AM Glad you found this real friendship....A blessing....7 Jack Ellison May 27, 2015 at 12:07 PM REAL friendships are rare in this day and age! Thank you dear Nandita... huggs, Jack xxx

Judy Konos May 26, 2015 at 7:20 AM A GOOD ONE......And that's EXACTLY how "I" lost the BEST FRIEND I ever had! Jack Ellison May 27, 2015 at 12:05 PM That is so sad, dear Judy! So sorry... my heart goes out to you sweet lady Love, Jack xxx