An Ordinary Chore

Swaying with electrical cord to the rhythmic hum
of my new vacuum cleaner, I relax into thoughts 
of slow dancing with you. My hands steadily drum
to the soft music playing inside my head. Caught
between the background of little boy’s morning cartoons
and a moment of my own, the vacuum drowns out 
reality of a Tuesday morning. I whistle the tune
of our wedding song and picture you going about
your day alone at your desk, wondering as I croon,
if you, too, are thinking of me. After all these years,
I still find happiness in thoughts of you. Lost in a June
day from long ago, I steal a smile then imagine you here
with me, dancing barefoot on freshly vacuumed carpet.
An ordinary chore, the vacuum cleaner’s hum 
still spurs memories of us too extraordinary to forget.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Thorisdottir  Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 4:54 AM
Who would have thought such a menial task could bring about such passion and nostalgia. What a lovely poem, keep writing!
Ryerson Avatar
December 5, 2013 at 3:08 PM
One small thing, one little moment in time...Captured so brilliantly by you my friend! Are you familiar with the last chapter of Cannery Row when Doc is washing the dishes after the party? This gem reminds me a little of that...Congrats - Tim
Lamoureux Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 6:57 PM
Outstanding piece, I agree one of the best.
Dietrich Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 6:07 PM
this for me was one of my very favorites. Still loving it. BIG congrats for your win.
Hamilton Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 3:59 PM
I enjoyed this Rhonda congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
Gorelick Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 2:35 PM
Nice, and a bit different..Romantic vacuuming.! congrats. BG
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 1:27 PM
Congratulations Rhonda xx
May Avatar
December 3, 2013 at 1:09 PM
very nice write Rhonda....congrats on your win
Dietrich Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 10:26 PM
this is gloriously EXTRAordinary writing on an ordinary thing . It is not ordinary actually at MY house. My husband does not do a lick of housework to be near a vacuum, and nor does he dance!! I love this one.
Goller Avatar
November 28, 2013 at 10:08 AM
that's a magical vacuum cleaner bringing back such lovely memories,I enjoyed reading the story, God bless you. Hugs! Erich' Happy thanksgiving!
Andresen Avatar
November 28, 2013 at 4:41 AM
- Such a vacuum cleaner must I buy ..... playing music and brings out beautiful memories......lol.- A lovely written poem Rhonda !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Sivey Avatar
November 27, 2013 at 11:45 PM
Yes that might be an ordinary chore, vacuuming, but it can bring back memories of an old memorable time...as you have written of a great memory and heartfelt times! I really loved reading about this wonderful time that you hold in your heart...especially how it gets activated every time you use the vacuum! What a brilliant poem I have read this evening, Great Work!!
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