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An Orchid

*Image of Cattleya Orchid by Family Photos.

An Orchid

Astir, the bestilled buds wake, an ocean,
Nascent feel Aurora's palm in motion,

Of her perianths like a kestrel's wings,
Rare diaphanous prismatic heartstrings,
Chimeric visions arrest passing eyes,
Halcyon's confidences, secrete her guise,
Iridescence and redolence yon oaths,
Divine dulcet elysian her outgrowths.

2022 August 23
*4th Place*
Eight Lines of Rhyme - Your Favorite Flower
~~Tania Kitchin: Judged 2022 September 04
Copyright © | Year Posted 2022

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Fowler Avatar
September 5, 2022 at 6:53 AM
Lovely poem William, with great rhyming. Congratulations on your win! Linda
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 5, 2022 at 8:57 AM
Thanks, Linda, I appreciate your thoughts my friend, Aloha William
Kitchin Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 2:28 PM
William, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative poem!
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
September 4, 2022 at 2:51 PM
Thanks, Tania, appreciate my placement my friend, Aloha William
George Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 6:06 AM
Love the description where the orchid petals are compared to kestrel's wings ! Beautiful analogy, dear William !
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
August 28, 2022 at 8:40 AM
Thank you, Valsa, I appreciate your highlights and visit my friend, Aloha~William
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