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*Image of Cattleya Orchid by Family Photos. An Orchid Astir, the bestilled buds wake, an ocean, Nascent feel Aurora's palm in motion, Of her perianths like a kestrel's wings, Rare diaphanous prismatic heartstrings, Chimeric visions arrest passing eyes, Halcyon's confidences, secrete her guise, Iridescence and redolence yon oaths, Divine dulcet elysian her outgrowths. 2022 August 23 *4th Place* Eight Lines of Rhyme - Your Favorite Flower ~~Tania Kitchin: Judged 2022 September 04

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Date: 9/5/2022 6:53:00 AM
Lovely poem William, with great rhyming. Congratulations on your win! Linda
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Date: 9/5/2022 8:57:00 AM
Thanks, Linda, I appreciate your thoughts my friend, Aloha William
Date: 9/4/2022 2:28:00 PM
William, congratulations on your winning placement with your creative poem!
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Date: 9/4/2022 2:51:00 PM
Thanks, Tania, appreciate my placement my friend, Aloha William
Date: 8/28/2022 6:06:00 AM
Love the description where the orchid petals are compared to kestrel's wings ! Beautiful analogy, dear William !
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Date: 8/28/2022 8:40:00 AM
Thank you, Valsa, I appreciate your highlights and visit my friend, Aloha~William

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