An Opened Door, Steps On the Floor

I heard pages flipping
As a sign of calling,
We both needed each attention
And we both realised there was a tension,
At night we will wish a good
Though there was a flowing mood,
I closed the door without locking
Thinking of going in without knocking,
I could hear her voice talking over phone
To wish she was in this bed refreshing my backbone,
But she just waited
And i just hesitated,
An opened door
Steps on the floor.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Whatley Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 8:23 AM
Really liking the build-up in this piece, and great rhythm, Sello. P.S. Love how you rhymed "good" and "mood" - works especially well if you're Scottish!
Modiba  Avatar
May 12, 2016 at 3:20 AM
Thanks
A  Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 6:57 PM
a good sonnet,, thank you for sharing
Modiba  Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 6:50 AM
Thanks Skat A
Kimathi Avatar
May 6, 2016 at 4:54 PM
I love the rhythm that flows naturally in your verse! Thanks for commenting on my poem, "Last Laugh".
Modiba  Avatar
May 9, 2016 at 6:51 AM
Appreciated
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